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Re. Senryu Self 1
30th Jan 2018 11:26pm
Amen to this, mirrors are the most talented of liars... Powerful write
- Fairy
- Fairy
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Re: Re. Senryu Self 1
30th Jan 2018 11:29pm
Thank you so much Fairy. Mirrors capture just our one dimension and we are all so much more.
Re. Senryu Self 1
31st Jan 2018 8:42am
Re: Re. Senryu Self 1
31st Jan 2018 8:46am
Re. Senryu Self 1
31st Jan 2018 9:01pm
I call my mirror a liar and it just replies "You wish!" I spend as little time in front of it as possible. Love these profound three lines.
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Re: Re. Senryu Self 1
31st Jan 2018 9:06pm
Ha! If your mirror's talking back you may have a different problem entirely . Thank you Sir Crow.
Re. Senryu Self 1
1st Feb 2018 7:13am
Re: Re. Senryu Self 1
1st Feb 2018 7:35am
Thank you so much Mel. As I grow older I notice more and more that what's in a person's heart and soul informs how we look at their exterior. Also I grown to see beauty in our flaws.
Re. Senryu Self 1
7th Feb 2018 9:40pm
A powerful haiki portraying how we can't completely rely on mirrors or our eyes to show us whether or not we're beautiful. Often times, the mirror is our enemy as we check ourselves out and always find flaws. You've written it very well: "Beauty is soul deep."
Well done!
Well done!
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Re: Re. Senryu Self 1
7th Feb 2018 11:11pm
Thank you Luna! As I grow older I see more beauty in the flaws...to me they represent real life. Thank you again.
Re: Re. Senryu Self 1
7th Feb 2018 11:20pm