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VERACITY FOUND
Who are the real people?
am I real?
genuine to the core?
or a mere artifice
of who I and others
think I should be?
In whom can I place
my implicit trust?
Palpable is your truth
your scent, sweet voice,
kind sometimes mischievous smile
your slightest movement
all poetry, all authentic
The feel of your hair
at my fingers touch
the fine down tendrils
softly caressing my face
when the back of your neck I kiss
this is my truth
Succulent lips
pressed to mine
rough, wet surface
of our tongues
entwined, dancing
sensual excitement
alight in mesmerizing eyes
me sincerely desiring
this is my truth
Hot breath whispers
transmit tingles down the spine
comforting words
of love and acceptance
permeating my soul
coming to rest In my loins
this is my truth
Your shoulders
smooth and round
the electricity
beneath your skin
as my tongue runs
slowly across
Its supple, fragrant surface
.this is my truth
The warm humid place
beneath your breasts
felt as I lift each
erect nipple to my
hungry mouth to kiss,
nibble and suck
my head
by your gentle hands
kept in place
this is my truth
My hands on your ass
holding you close
your heat against me pressed
ready inner sanctum begging me enter
satisfied moans as I comply
deeply rooted
we ride the wave of passion
this is my truth
Weary of a world
where deception’s de rigueur
in you I find truth
profound intimacy,
our reality
amour our ever-faithful gude.
am I real?
genuine to the core?
or a mere artifice
of who I and others
think I should be?
In whom can I place
my implicit trust?
Palpable is your truth
your scent, sweet voice,
kind sometimes mischievous smile
your slightest movement
all poetry, all authentic
The feel of your hair
at my fingers touch
the fine down tendrils
softly caressing my face
when the back of your neck I kiss
this is my truth
Succulent lips
pressed to mine
rough, wet surface
of our tongues
entwined, dancing
sensual excitement
alight in mesmerizing eyes
me sincerely desiring
this is my truth
Hot breath whispers
transmit tingles down the spine
comforting words
of love and acceptance
permeating my soul
coming to rest In my loins
this is my truth
Your shoulders
smooth and round
the electricity
beneath your skin
as my tongue runs
slowly across
Its supple, fragrant surface
.this is my truth
The warm humid place
beneath your breasts
felt as I lift each
erect nipple to my
hungry mouth to kiss,
nibble and suck
my head
by your gentle hands
kept in place
this is my truth
My hands on your ass
holding you close
your heat against me pressed
ready inner sanctum begging me enter
satisfied moans as I comply
deeply rooted
we ride the wave of passion
this is my truth
Weary of a world
where deception’s de rigueur
in you I find truth
profound intimacy,
our reality
amour our ever-faithful gude.
Published 29th Jan 2018
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Anonymous
30th Jan 2018 4:13am
oh my word! Gahdess,
it is an extremely rare thing to find connection in a white maze, isn't?
..blow me away, why dont ya.. ;)
it is an extremely rare thing to find connection in a white maze, isn't?
..blow me away, why dont ya.. ;)
30th Jan 2018 4:20am
Thank you so much, Sunset. I am very happy you enjoyed the piece. I hadn't written erotica in a while but lately have been drawn to it once more. When I took all my other erotic poems down it felt like removing my paintings from a gallery. You're awesome!
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Oct 2018 4:47am
30th Jan 2018 5:09am
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30th Jan 2018 6:02am
Thank you Danielle! I am enthralled by real, deep intimacy and I am so pleased that you sense that from my words. Your comments let me know that I am capable of making another feel romantic and sensual. Thank you again.
Bob :)
Bob :)
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Oct 2018 4:47am
30th Jan 2018 4:08pm
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30th Jan 2018 5:57am
Romantic. Favourite verses, the first for describing downward journey of sexual excitement:
Hot breath whispers
transmit tingles down the spine
comforting words
of love and acceptance
andMy hands on your ass
holding you close
your heat against me pressed
ready inner sanctum begging me enter
satisfied moans as I comply
deeply rooted
we ride the wave of passion
this is my truth
Male readers may feel ready to be "deeply rooted" themselves by the end!
permeating my soul
coming to rest In my loins
this is my truth
Hot breath whispers
transmit tingles down the spine
comforting words
of love and acceptance
andMy hands on your ass
holding you close
your heat against me pressed
ready inner sanctum begging me enter
satisfied moans as I comply
deeply rooted
we ride the wave of passion
this is my truth
Male readers may feel ready to be "deeply rooted" themselves by the end!
permeating my soul
coming to rest In my loins
this is my truth
30th Jan 2018 6:04am
Thank you so much Solomon! You encourage me with your comment and I am so glad that you found some joy in the piece.
Not merely sensual joy but inspiration! I have just written a poem two particular words, "deeply rooted" inspired - titled Deeply Planted - in this section, couched in horticultural terms!
30th Jan 2018 3:32pm
This is so beautifully sensual, amazed by the sensibilities of your perception which I haven't seen much even in women. Also convinced by the insight you have between men and women. Enjoy reading this work very much!
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
30th Jan 2018 9:16pm
Thank you so much RoseJasmine! Your comment makes me feel so happy inside. I am glad that my words somehow touched you.
30th Jan 2018 10:48pm
After reading this, I'm sure I missed reading some very sensual poems upon you taking down your earlier work.
What I enjoyed about the work:
You do an excellent job in getting to the inner feelings of true love making, not just the lustful side effects of fucking.
Describing the feeling of being with someone you truly want to become one with is hard to capture, yet you have here.
That you chose wording that did not require me to reach for a dictionary more than a couple of times (my vocabulary shortcomings). Many write in a style that, for me anyhow, causes the reader to have to stop and research so many words, it almost causes a loss of interest in finishing the read.
What I found lacking:
Very much enjoyed this, Bob
Teri
What I enjoyed about the work:
You do an excellent job in getting to the inner feelings of true love making, not just the lustful side effects of fucking.
Describing the feeling of being with someone you truly want to become one with is hard to capture, yet you have here.
That you chose wording that did not require me to reach for a dictionary more than a couple of times (my vocabulary shortcomings). Many write in a style that, for me anyhow, causes the reader to have to stop and research so many words, it almost causes a loss of interest in finishing the read.
What I found lacking:
Very much enjoyed this, Bob
Teri
30th Jan 2018 11:02pm
Thank you so much Teri! I try to go as deep as possible to capture the magic that is love making. I am glad that you liked the piece...that makes me happy.
