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I will return someday...
To watch you enter the room again,
Again to watch you enter my life,
To fall more deeply in love,
To overcome all remorse that had developed...
To walk to roads hand-in-hand,
To listen to your favourite band,
To hug you by the riverside,
Till the dusk fades into the night...
To listen to the promises you make,
To feed you what I learnt to bake,
To sit and dream together by the shore,
To feel your love - just a little more...
This life was short With lots to be done,
Don't be sad, I'll reborn
Yes, I'll return someday,
The uncleared debts - I'll pay
Again to watch you enter my life,
To fall more deeply in love,
To overcome all remorse that had developed...
To walk to roads hand-in-hand,
To listen to your favourite band,
To hug you by the riverside,
Till the dusk fades into the night...
To listen to the promises you make,
To feed you what I learnt to bake,
To sit and dream together by the shore,
To feel your love - just a little more...
This life was short With lots to be done,
Don't be sad, I'll reborn
Yes, I'll return someday,
The uncleared debts - I'll pay
Published 29th Jan 2018
| Edited 3rd Nov 2018
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19th May 2019 9:53pm
Some of the rhymes feel forced
(as if maybe a better word is available but You wanted a rhyme)
Other than that the thoughts You spilled out and arranged
made sense and a joy to read
(as if maybe a better word is available but You wanted a rhyme)
Other than that the thoughts You spilled out and arranged
made sense and a joy to read
