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soaring nonchalance
With the old washed up renditions
Croons new ringing endorsement...
Singing those overpriced ego tunes
While they play their cheap fiddle...
As they then mock the weak minds
In order to feel their false virtue...
Their persistence of blurred visions
Thus dies on their drawing board...
Then with magnus and skulduggery
They break from the group soul...
And with deceptive idol conclusions
They do cheat the spirit measure...
Into a more dimebag than diamonds
Mindless feeling for heartless reason...
Croons new ringing endorsement...
Singing those overpriced ego tunes
While they play their cheap fiddle...
As they then mock the weak minds
In order to feel their false virtue...
Their persistence of blurred visions
Thus dies on their drawing board...
Then with magnus and skulduggery
They break from the group soul...
And with deceptive idol conclusions
They do cheat the spirit measure...
Into a more dimebag than diamonds
Mindless feeling for heartless reason...
Published 29th Jan 2018
| Edited 14th Feb 2018
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This is glamorous in wording and profound in meaning. Those beautiful words are overwhelming...
"Mindless feeling for heartless reason..." especially can relate to "soaring nonchalance" which you want to emphasize...dear Jeff, you pointed out the ugly side of the world but expressed it in an artistic and poetic way...
much love
RoseJasmine
"Mindless feeling for heartless reason..." especially can relate to "soaring nonchalance" which you want to emphasize...dear Jeff, you pointed out the ugly side of the world but expressed it in an artistic and poetic way...
much love
RoseJasmine
29th Jan 2018 11:08pm
thank you so much sweetheart...those words are inspired from all the wonderful ports here...
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
Anonymous
30th Jan 2018 1:40am
ive felt the spikes the spikes of "the not giving a damn",
good thing they gave me enough power to return the
favor ;)
good one dahling
good thing they gave me enough power to return the
favor ;)
good one dahling
poems are beautiful swords used to kill the fearmongers...I stab at thee jive turkeys...they feel the sharp wit and diminish...
thank you bunches
my lovely friend
Jeff
thank you bunches
my lovely friend
Jeff
Anonymous
30th Jan 2018 2:25am
Lol i gotcha ya hun
30th Jan 2018 7:56am
dearest Jeff this is some powerful observations
of ones who would elevate themselves in their minds falsely..
profound ink..
love Brenda
of ones who would elevate themselves in their minds falsely..
profound ink..
love Brenda
30th Jan 2018 1:53pm
1st Feb 2018 3:46am
Bullets of the Poet...a sweet look into the abyss...profound ink Jeff.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
1st Feb 2018 5:23am
thanks for the awesome comment....it does flow cynical as I reread...
Jeff
Jeff
4th Feb 2018 10:45pm
Simple lines rocking and rolling the ever depths far beyond human dimensions
digging through to the bare guts and bones of us beings
as well as rings of our own spiritual tunes..
"Singing those overpriced ego tunes
While they play their cheap fiddle...
As they then mock the weak minds
In order to feel their false virtue...
Their persistence of blurred visions
Thus dies on their drawing board... "
wickedness of the evil polluting our souls I must avoid..
if only many more heard and listened to your words..
<3<3
H
digging through to the bare guts and bones of us beings
as well as rings of our own spiritual tunes..
"Singing those overpriced ego tunes
While they play their cheap fiddle...
As they then mock the weak minds
In order to feel their false virtue...
Their persistence of blurred visions
Thus dies on their drawing board... "
wickedness of the evil polluting our souls I must avoid..
if only many more heard and listened to your words..
<3<3
H
4th Feb 2018 11:39pm
6th Feb 2018 1:14pm
