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Melancholy
the freckled dawn wept
for Yesterday's child
left at Tomorrow's door
born of regret
& named Melancholy
by the day who claimed her
her soul shadowed by Night
was conceived in the grey
wrought in ache
& delivered into fate's hands
Yesterday watched from afar
as her little one grew
from stormy toddler
to brooding teen
her gentle hand guiding each step
Tomorrow loved her
but never fully understood
the pain Melancholy inherited
being a child of Yesterday
she grew into an ethereal divinity
sought by grieving lovers
her imagination stains their hearts
the most vivid color of midnight
a work of art
for those who have loved & lost
something they can hold on to
Yesterday cried for the piece of her
she couldn't replace
Night gifted her a shadowy child
with a gift to move even the most stoic
poignant memories now brighten
all of Tomorrow's days
Yesterday's pain erased
so she no longer bare the guilt
of Melancholy
the child the dawn never forgot
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Re. Melancholy
29th Jan 2018 00:43am
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Re. Melancholy
Anonymous
29th Jan 2018 1:02am
Raven.. simply brilliant.. into my list it goes.. much respect..
Dave
Dave

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29th Jan 2018 1:05am
Re. Melancholy
29th Jan 2018 1:17am
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29th Jan 2018 1:23am
thank you dearest Poet i'm honored & deeply moved by your comment :)
love Raven
love Raven
Re. Melancholy
29th Jan 2018 2:01am
Raven.....i need this on my list..
you have moved me...shifted thoughts n what not
this reads like the scroll of
a victorious soul..
and i am so inspired..
there's more but um tongue tied..
you have moved me...shifted thoughts n what not
this reads like the scroll of
a victorious soul..
and i am so inspired..
there's more but um tongue tied..
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Re: Re. Melancholy
29th Jan 2018 3:55am
thank you graciously Soul Soldier I love your comment..that you found this inspiring lifts my soul..
love Raven
love Raven
Re. Melancholy
29th Jan 2018 7:39am
You just keep getting better - this is such a special write - made me weep :-(((
such a beautiful emotionally charged write and easy RL add :-))))
Huge Hugs :-))))))
such a beautiful emotionally charged write and easy RL add :-))))
Huge Hugs :-))))))
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Re: Re. Melancholy
30th Jan 2018 10:11am
thank you graciously dearest David
i'm so happy to have touched you..
love Raven
i'm so happy to have touched you..
love Raven
Re. Melancholy
Anonymous
29th Jan 2018 1:56pm
Beautiful Raven, your use of metaphor here is astounding and breathtaking. Infusing future with beauty despite the pain.
...Willow
...Willow

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Re: Re. Melancholy
30th Jan 2018 10:13am
thank you beautiful Willow most graciously for your comment that gifted me the biggest smile :)
love Raven
love Raven
Re. Melancholy
29th Jan 2018 8:43pm
I love that 3rd stanza
"her soul shadowed by Night
was conceived in the grey
wrought in ache
& delivered into fate's hands "- conceived in the grey makes me think of werewolves for some reason,all the same i want to watch "underworld" now lol.
it overall feels like a story of coming up, personal growth,and even though orphans we all deserve more form the clutches of life and promises from "the new colossus".
the gutters in the streets may reclaim us all one day but for now we stand on the sidewalk
and yes we do bite.
i want to go sit on a hill and wait until i see a freckled dawn.
well penned smackdownraven (crimsin?) - (i had no idea until about 10 minutes ago you were a multiple profile poet.)
"her soul shadowed by Night
was conceived in the grey
wrought in ache
& delivered into fate's hands "- conceived in the grey makes me think of werewolves for some reason,all the same i want to watch "underworld" now lol.
it overall feels like a story of coming up, personal growth,and even though orphans we all deserve more form the clutches of life and promises from "the new colossus".
the gutters in the streets may reclaim us all one day but for now we stand on the sidewalk
and yes we do bite.
i want to go sit on a hill and wait until i see a freckled dawn.
well penned smackdownraven (crimsin?) - (i had no idea until about 10 minutes ago you were a multiple profile poet.)
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Re: Re. Melancholy
30th Jan 2018 10:15am
thank you graciously dearest Samael i'm over the moon happy to get one of your very special critiques.. yes it's me Crim I was keeping Raven a secret until I found out that doing so is breaking the rules here..
love Raven aka Crim
love Raven aka Crim
Re: Re. Melancholy
30th Jan 2018 12:11pm
i won't tell mom if you won't lol, but i'm sure the cats already out of the bag.
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30th Jan 2018 1:43am
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Re: Re. Melancholy
30th Jan 2018 10:17am
thank you graciously dearest Ghost i'm so happy you enjoyed this write i'm smiling wide :)
love Raven
love Raven
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30th Jan 2018 10:31am
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Re: Re. Melancholy
30th Jan 2018 12:12pm
i won't tell mom if you won't lol, but i'm sure the cats already out of the bag.
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Re: Re. Melancholy
30th Jan 2018 4:32pm
aw thank you beautiful Daniella you honor me greatly with such a moving comment.. gifting me smiles this morning :)
love Raven
love Raven
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30th Jan 2018 4:35pm
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Re. Melancholy
Anonymous
1st Feb 2018 1:42pm
Wow such a wonderful poem
You definitely have a way with words ....lovn this
Great job
You definitely have a way with words ....lovn this
Great job

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1st Feb 2018 10:59pm