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"tI looC" tsuJ
Normally when an inspiration for a poem hits me, I write it down. However, this time I couldn't decide on which direction to go, so, I went with a few different ones.
sesaerc ;aocaf sesaec emit litnu smron erutarepmet rof tiaw eht si retteb ,sesaecrcni taeh sa ,smarw top eht nehW
.lio detaehrevo morf liomrut ruoy ,emalb gincalp dna sthguoht gnidlacs gnisuac ,liob snordluac tel llew ,semalf dedraugnU
.renniw ruoy s'looc zuc' ,remmilg ruoy eb ,erised rieht ton dna lessev ruoy gnittel ,remmis woleb syats ,eirf ruoy retteB
winner. your cool's 'cuz glimmer your be
desire, their not and vessel your letting
simmer, below stays fire, your Better
oil. overheated from turmoil your
blame, placing and thoughts scalding causing
boil, cauldrons let will flames Unguarded
ceases. facial ceases time until
norms, temperature for wait the is better
increases, heat as warms, pot the When
When the pot warms, as heat increases
better is the wait for temperature norms
until time ceases facial creases.
Unguarded flames will let cauldrons boil,
causing scalding thoughts and placing blame,
your turmoil from overheated oil.
Better your fire, stays below simmer,
letting your vessel and not their desire,
be your glimmer, 'cuz cool's your winner.
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26th Jan 2018 2:27am
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26th Jan 2018 3:27am
Re. "tI looC" tsuJ
26th Jan 2018 3:41am
Amorous, clever and wise piece. Today we especially need to reduce the heat because there are many things that cause us anxiety and anger in this day and age. I am limiting my reading, listening, or watching the news to about once a week and even at that it causes such extreme sadness and disappointment...not a great time for deep, emotional thinkers. Bravisima!
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26th Jan 2018 4:54pm
Your words ring much truth. Seems every time I tune in to the news there is nothing but bad news. I fully expect to hear of yet another mass shooting or bombing somewhere, and if not that, just discourse or malcontent from all over the world.
Thanks so much for stopping by.
Thanks so much for stopping by.
Re. "tI looC" tsuJ
26th Jan 2018 5:41am
There's me feeling good I'd deciphered only to find deciphered below after scrolling xD
Takes time to write out so congrats to you
Takes time to write out so congrats to you
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26th Jan 2018 5:03pm
Awww, Rose, I'm sorry I put you through all that. I work from a laptop, so, most of it was on my screen as I played with it. It didn't cross my mind that many would see it only on a hand held device, thus limiting what could be seen without scrolling down. But, hey, I'll give you an A+ for doing so. Now you know I don't have anything to say, worth all that work. :-))))
Next time I'll give you a heads up before posting. :-))
Thanks so much for your efforts,
Next time I'll give you a heads up before posting. :-))
Thanks so much for your efforts,
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26th Jan 2018 5:05pm
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26th Jan 2018 7:31pm
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Re: Re. "tI looC" tsuJ
26th Jan 2018 9:52pm
Yes, the vessel designed to last a lifetime, but repeated exposure to high temperature can cause premature failure.
Just came to mind, this: "She's a tall cool glass of water" Hmmm. :-))
Much respect for your thoughts, Dani.
Just came to mind, this: "She's a tall cool glass of water" Hmmm. :-))
Much respect for your thoughts, Dani.
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26th Jan 2018 11:05pm
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26th Jan 2018 11:31pm
The poem, your "steam" comment, a hot cauldron, and how a good woman can cool that pot, = this. Don't remember where I heard it, probably a movie or book I'm sure.
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Anonymous
28th Jan 2018 4:16am
originality at it's best..
creativity....content...and the evoking of deep thought
creativity....content...and the evoking of deep thought

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Re: Re. "tI looC" tsuJ
28th Jan 2018 4:40am
Reverse engineering and writing from the ground up?, or maybe just the product of redundancy reduction.
But hey, I like your perspective better, so, we'll go with that.
Much appreciation Sir Naajir
But hey, I like your perspective better, so, we'll go with that.
Much appreciation Sir Naajir
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29th Jan 2018 9:16am
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29th Jan 2018 2:23pm
ahahahahahahah!
Discernable in every language, the world over.
No interpretation needed.
Thank you, David
Discernable in every language, the world over.
No interpretation needed.
Thank you, David
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Re: Re. "tI looC" tsuJ
31st Jan 2018 00:15am
Agreed, the news is very depressing most days.
Thanks, Hans. Your presents helps counteract the world happenings.
Thanks, Hans. Your presents helps counteract the world happenings.