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Faith, Hope?
Faith is this to me
a zenith screaming to my habitual discerning dreams
a uncertain future bathing around my now unsure thought
crying a beguiling rattlesnake of my failed Health
I wonder if future, happiness is real
Friends disappear, loves lost, to time and distance
this is faith to me, sometimes like my mind, it betrays me.
a zenith screaming to my habitual discerning dreams
a uncertain future bathing around my now unsure thought
crying a beguiling rattlesnake of my failed Health
I wonder if future, happiness is real
Friends disappear, loves lost, to time and distance
this is faith to me, sometimes like my mind, it betrays me.
Published 29th Sep 2011
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...and the bag of commas, and tidy this up.
this is faith to me;
a zenith screaming to my habitual discerning dreams (make this line make sense)
an uncertain future bathing in my unsure thoughts
crying a beguiling rattlesnake of my failed Health (beguiling rattlesnake of??? what do you mean?)
I wonder if future happiness is real
Friends disappear
loves is lost to time and distance
this is faith to me
and sometimes
like my mind
it betrays me
H.
this is faith to me;
a zenith screaming to my habitual discerning dreams (make this line make sense)
an uncertain future bathing in my unsure thoughts
crying a beguiling rattlesnake of my failed Health (beguiling rattlesnake of??? what do you mean?)
I wonder if future happiness is real
Friends disappear
loves is lost to time and distance
this is faith to me
and sometimes
like my mind
it betrays me
H.
