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IT IS SO (1996, Galveston Island, Texas)
right my blood
with the love
i am
sight my heart
on the one
we are
create only good
with our own
divine power
know
as we think
so we are
Published 24th Jan 2018
| Edited 12th Sep 2021
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2nd Jul 2019 7:52pm
3rd Jul 2019 9:38pm
Thanks Tallen, but in truth, the entire poem & each of it's sections are all, individually & as a collective whole, deeply & profoundly spiritual in essence & in it's self realized message. I appreciate your feedback & happy to hear that you at least sensed 'that' in it's final part!
3rd Jul 2019 9:43pm
appreciate Your explanation.
I don't always understand poetry and that's why i got into this gig -- because of my being a schizophrenic
abstract and spiritual is such a struggle for me in Real Life,
I thought maybe i could gain some insight and practice understand poetry -- a much more difficult form.
I am guessing that i probably understand about 70% of life as my senses interpret and translate.
& so, Yes!! I am grateful for You and for You explaining more for me.
I don't always understand poetry and that's why i got into this gig -- because of my being a schizophrenic
abstract and spiritual is such a struggle for me in Real Life,
I thought maybe i could gain some insight and practice understand poetry -- a much more difficult form.
I am guessing that i probably understand about 70% of life as my senses interpret and translate.
& so, Yes!! I am grateful for You and for You explaining more for me.
