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papers strewn on a sidewalk
wheres the set of words i promised myself
in the wind with the rest of the leaves and
all the markings are
a pen's expression of a dream
ink from a fingertip connected to my heart’s motion
and papers they have the ability to fly
walking away i wonder if i should have
picked you
up in a scattered form
rambling words ,
grasping onto you
a shuffling moment’s movement
as my papers danced
all wrinkled within
wind make the hinges
in the wind with the rest of the leaves and
all the markings are
a pen's expression of a dream
ink from a fingertip connected to my heart’s motion
and papers they have the ability to fly
walking away i wonder if i should have
picked you
up in a scattered form
rambling words ,
grasping onto you
a shuffling moment’s movement
as my papers danced
all wrinkled within
wind make the hinges
Published 14th Jan 2018
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14th Jan 2018 6:37pm
the first thing that comes to mind is flyleaf
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=01fttIlMgIg
this is what you inspired in me with your write
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the pen passed a dream down a hallway
by chance
inspiring a write that was written with a vigor
autumn leaves passed as the mail man
noticed
but unnoticed
connecting the dots from hearts to lips of a lover
cursive caught me off guard
threw me into the metal rail
leaps and bounds
leaving my folder on top of my car
i drove off
a wind witch threw my words as rain
and you
the sun came and helped me pick them up
i gave you a hug
my chest fell a thousand times past my feet
in a beat
past the sidewalks grey concrete
fingertips digging in your back
i crumbled as your cookie
and forgot how long forever was in your eyes
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Love it.
promises
the wind and leaves leaving their marks on skin
dream ink
honestly i could go on and on
well penned mariellewrites
keep up the great writing, thoughts,and feelings dangling from the tip of that pen of yours.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=01fttIlMgIg
this is what you inspired in me with your write
-------------------------------------------------------------------
the pen passed a dream down a hallway
by chance
inspiring a write that was written with a vigor
autumn leaves passed as the mail man
noticed
but unnoticed
connecting the dots from hearts to lips of a lover
cursive caught me off guard
threw me into the metal rail
leaps and bounds
leaving my folder on top of my car
i drove off
a wind witch threw my words as rain
and you
the sun came and helped me pick them up
i gave you a hug
my chest fell a thousand times past my feet
in a beat
past the sidewalks grey concrete
fingertips digging in your back
i crumbled as your cookie
and forgot how long forever was in your eyes
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Love it.
promises
the wind and leaves leaving their marks on skin
dream ink
honestly i could go on and on
well penned mariellewrites
keep up the great writing, thoughts,and feelings dangling from the tip of that pen of yours.
17th Jan 2018 8:00pm
14th Jan 2018 11:39pm
beautiful Marielle this is some utterly delightful writing
you muse clearly loves you to inspire such a wondrous write..
love Crim
you muse clearly loves you to inspire such a wondrous write..
love Crim
17th Jan 2018 8:00pm
18th Jan 2018 3:22pm
Your words, they are magician's flowers, strewed on the flowing stream and woven by the water drops, harmoniously they become the music notes of a symphony. Very beautifully written...can't believe it was inspired by papers, ink and the wind...
Love the words how they weave each other together, and the sentiment you have conveyed in them :))) It's in my reading list which belongs to you!
much much love
RoseJasmine
Love the words how they weave each other together, and the sentiment you have conveyed in them :))) It's in my reading list which belongs to you!
much much love
RoseJasmine
20th Jan 2018 4:20pm
oh rose jasmine thank you, your words truly touch my heart. your feedback gives me confidence to grow more in my writings. have a wonderful day
19th Jan 2018 5:05am
Amazingly beautiful. I like the effect of seeing something different each time i read this piece of art
20th Jan 2018 4:20pm
Anonymous
28th Jan 2018 1:07am
Marielle.. beautiful, and powerful.. great ink.. into my list it goes.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
28th Jan 2018 10:36pm
