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Haikus of Loneliness 7.0
(i) Dinner
no dinning option
chicken dinner just for one
It's left uneaten
(ii) Missing
is Loneliness
really missing everyone
or just missing you
(iii) Locked in
Loneliness is
the darkest of my dungeons
I can't find the key
(iv) Tonight
tonight the darkness
befriends me; the back stabber
wounded I die alone
(v) TIME
the clock ticks and talks
it tells me i am worthless
time to lock and load
(vi) Shut The Fuck Up
I'm hearing whispers
in a cold dark room loudly
nobody to tell
(vii) Punching Smoke
I bang on the walls
Nobody to hear my scream
fists are made from tears
Published 14th Jan 2018
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14th Jan 2018 10:36am
Sending you much Love and Light, my friend. 💕 These are excellent and capture the agony of the feeling succinctly.
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Anonymous
14th Jan 2018 2:48pm
It breaks my heart when I read these haikus. They're so perfectly expressed that they leave no room for doubt. You're well acquainted with this beast. In spirit we are there holding you tight. And you know we would if not for that damn pond. Nothing could keep us from your door, my friend. And you know the we/us I speak of. Sending so many hugs for you this night and every, David
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
14th Jan 2018 8:28pm
hugs and love make such a difference really works dragging me from the pit of hell :-)))
Huge massive Hugs :-))))))
Huge massive Hugs :-))))))
14th Jan 2018 7:28pm
dearest David this write made my heart break
that you ache like this I know the pain intimately..
love & hugs..
Brenda
that you ache like this I know the pain intimately..
love & hugs..
Brenda
14th Jan 2018 8:29pm
your comments raise my spirits - thank you :-))))))))))
Huge massive Huggs :-))))) <3
Huge massive Huggs :-))))) <3
Anonymous
15th Jan 2018 8:00pm
My dear friend David, you know what reading these incredible senyru's do to us...pain is felt in the darkest depths of souls and there are only wishes of taking hold and ridding you of such thoughts and aches...know that we always hold you tight...wrapped and surrounded by the warmest of fuzzies, always....
much love to you
xoxo Taryn
much love to you
xoxo Taryn
16th Jan 2018 6:47am
Dark though the hour of loneliness may be, I am forever with you in spirit my love. Your beautiful poetry aches in my heart to know of equal sadness when we are apart <3
Sending all of my love, and fluffy cozy teddy hugs for when I cannot be there =)
Sending all of my love, and fluffy cozy teddy hugs for when I cannot be there =)
7th Feb 2018 6:31am
thank you sweetie for your healing words - they mean such a lot to me :-)))))))))
love you to the moon and back :-)))))
love you to the moon and back :-)))))
