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Stripping It Down
Darling, strip it all down for me
Because it is all I want to see
As your clothes keep coming
Off. The steady drumming
Of your heartbeat, I can hear
It from across the room. You fear
That I will never like your taste
Or smell or the way your waist
Is big, but I really love it all.
You are my real life sized doll
With paradise in between parted
Lips and a valley of uncharted
Naked flesh. Ghost-like touching
Become grabbing and clutching.
Because it is all I want to see
As your clothes keep coming
Off. The steady drumming
Of your heartbeat, I can hear
It from across the room. You fear
That I will never like your taste
Or smell or the way your waist
Is big, but I really love it all.
You are my real life sized doll
With paradise in between parted
Lips and a valley of uncharted
Naked flesh. Ghost-like touching
Become grabbing and clutching.
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Re. Stripping It Down
14th Jan 2018 2:14am
this is so sexy and so genuine..
to be loved 'as is' is a beautiful thing..
true acceptance indeed..
to be loved 'as is' is a beautiful thing..
true acceptance indeed..
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Re: Re. Stripping It Down
14th Jan 2018 2:17am
Re. Stripping It Down
14th Jan 2018 7:50am
A sensuous invitation to undress. Favourite lines (a comfort to women who are anything but slim at waist):
You fear
That I will never like your taste
Or smell or the way your waist
Is big, but I really love it all.
This poem could be addressed to a pregnant wife.
You fear
That I will never like your taste
Or smell or the way your waist
Is big, but I really love it all.
This poem could be addressed to a pregnant wife.
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Re. Stripping It Down
14th Jan 2018 10:44am
Re. Stripping It Down
14th Jan 2018 11:41am