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Winter Rain
rain rain rain rain
wet and cold it's back again
on the mountains falling snow
it's just rain down here below
splish splash splish splash
all around the raindrops crash
trickling flowing merging surge
water water on the verge
of reuniting into streams
raging torrents liquid dreams
rushing back to where they came
the ocean mother of the rain
wet and cold it's back again
on the mountains falling snow
it's just rain down here below
splish splash splish splash
all around the raindrops crash
trickling flowing merging surge
water water on the verge
of reuniting into streams
raging torrents liquid dreams
rushing back to where they came
the ocean mother of the rain
Published 12th Jan 2018
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12th Jan 2018 9:57pm
"merging surge/water water on the verge" ... "of reuniting into streams/raging torrents liquid dreams" - great imagery and plump ripe words. Bravo!
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13th Jan 2018 3:33am
(a comment on your commentvvv)
haha...EW...love it
a meditative feeling of wetness of splishing and splashing of rain
"Liquid Dreams"
<3
H
haha...EW...love it
a meditative feeling of wetness of splishing and splashing of rain
"Liquid Dreams"
<3
H
13th Jan 2018 3:38am
13th Jan 2018 3:50am
Anonymous
13th Jan 2018 4:01pm
the ocean mother of the rain, beautiful last line and read.
13th Jan 2018 4:08pm
