Smooth

Awesome.

at first i thought you were eating blueberry cereal
with that first stanza

"Blueberry acai
slipped
from a ball
as blue
as two  
of yours "

sometimes you work is like laying down in grandma's garden of herbs

then again with this being an erotic write grandma should see where this lip balm is going  hahaha.

*no animals were harmed in the making of this poem lol.

Hehe!!! I want to be a raunchy old funny grandma some day full of innuendo. The shock value is priceless! 😆

Thanks dude!

And funnily enough, you're correct in all seriousness, the balm is cruelty free!

I attempt non-GMO, and gluten-free poems if possible.

LOL! I Love the word, ' muffiny '. . .so perfect.

Well done! Metaphorically astute!

Hehe! Thank you :)

I am in love with this piece.

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it :)

balm imbued
lips confused
berry brand
oh so blue.

(you do it so much better than I do!)

Nah, we just have our own styles :) But thank you!

in as much as i barely know about
much

&
this topic......
poem
is the reason i peer
from time to time😊
yeah yeah good poem
anway

Thank you so much!

This drips from the tongue like liquid gold - such a fantastic write ripe for performance :-)))))

I read it out  loud about ten times - it is beautiful :-)

Hugs :-))))))))))))))))))))

It's so cool that you read out loud! Do you do spoken often? I know we've touched on it briefly, but I don't remember how frequently you said you do it, or if it was only online?... If you have stuff out there as spoken word, I'd love to listen to it :)

I performed poetry regularly in Edinburgh - I have no video sadly just a few photos of me on stage at The Blind Poet bar

I am rehearsing now and hope to post audio performance poems quite soon - don't get nervous when its just me and the mic :-)))))

That's right! I recall you saying that now :) Excellent! I look forward to it