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blank slate
My cognition scrolled on tabula rasa__
Left brain makes love to the right
Positive always smiles at the negative
Male but such a fool for the female
Up needs to take a long look at down
Analytical attempts to be more creative
Logical tries hard to feel it's intuition
Precise begins to see more general
Detached starts to connect empathetic
Scientific practically thinks heuristic
Literal beginning to move figurative
Sequential parts have become irregular
Objective looks inside the subjective
Outer world finds another inner world
Conscious digs into the subconscious
Voluntary decides to be involuntary
Active has now been made passive
Animus was guided into anima
Being shall always be becoming
I was never very far from me
My shadow never catches up to myself__
Left brain makes love to the right
Positive always smiles at the negative
Male but such a fool for the female
Up needs to take a long look at down
Analytical attempts to be more creative
Logical tries hard to feel it's intuition
Precise begins to see more general
Detached starts to connect empathetic
Scientific practically thinks heuristic
Literal beginning to move figurative
Sequential parts have become irregular
Objective looks inside the subjective
Outer world finds another inner world
Conscious digs into the subconscious
Voluntary decides to be involuntary
Active has now been made passive
Animus was guided into anima
Being shall always be becoming
I was never very far from me
My shadow never catches up to myself__
Written by
runaway-mindtrain
Published 11th Jan 2018
| Edited 4th Feb 2018
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Re. blank slate
11th Jan 2018 1:29am
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11th Jan 2018 1:33am
Re. blank slate
11th Jan 2018 1:45am
Many of your precious beliefs and thoughts you plant here.. love how the opposing lines go to the other..
Always support your works..
<3
H
Always support your works..
<3
H
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Re: Re. blank slate
11th Jan 2018 1:49am
my sweet Hanuel...yes you always support my works...and I think you are scrumtrulesant!!
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
Re: Re. blank slate
11th Jan 2018 1:55am
oh... thank you lol for your wonderful word... and bringing your works here!
You are... wonder-wench!
You are... wonder-wench!
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Re. blank slate
Anonymous
11th Jan 2018 4:22am
this alone ignited inside me
"My shadow never catches up to myself__ "
all of it, just wow and then you used a favourite
concept of mine ... from a previous life that is
"My shadow never catches up to myself__ "
all of it, just wow and then you used a favourite
concept of mine ... from a previous life that is
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Re: Re. blank slate
11th Jan 2018 4:28am
how could I ever ignite the essence that is already splitsunsets....?
thank you so much for your sweetly support...and I remember that life you speak of?
love
Jeff
thank you so much for your sweetly support...and I remember that life you speak of?
love
Jeff
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Anonymous
11th Jan 2018 4:31am
no need to ask.. just know
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Re. blank slate
11th Jan 2018 5:29am
Ah the yin and yang that permeates everything...great ink man.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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11th Jan 2018 6:09am
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11th Jan 2018 9:52am
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Re: Re. blank slate
11th Jan 2018 3:35pm
Yes it can be a struggle to maintain... thank you for the read...
Jeff
Jeff
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11th Jan 2018 11:07am
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11th Jan 2018 3:34pm
Re. blank slate
12th Jan 2018 3:45am
it's almost complete, you have expressed almost everything I can imagine here...on your blank slate, I can see the two poles that need each other and always against each other. How magical your blank slate is...love your beautiful mind which can see things deeply...
much much love
RoseJasmine
much much love
RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. blank slate
12th Jan 2018 3:59am
thank you sweet Jasmine...you support me with such caring...
much love
Jeff
much love
Jeff
Re. blank slate
12th Jan 2018 10:18pm
Not to compliment myself but I felt as though I was reading myself. In both style and substance. I believe I have comparable material but that's not the point of this comment. Actually there is no point. This is a great poem whether it reminds me of my own stuff or not.
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Re: Re. blank slate
12th Jan 2018 11:00pm
thanks for the read....I'm sure you are smart and interested in many things I am....this is old philosophy in a poem I wrote a few years back....they say good minds think alike...I appreciate the support..
-Jeff
-Jeff
Re. blank slate
15th Jan 2018 7:22am
dearest poet highly evolved thinking
playful & yet intellectually serious..
love the word use & thought here..
love Raven
playful & yet intellectually serious..
love the word use & thought here..
love Raven
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15th Jan 2018 7:30am
Re. blank slate
15th Jan 2018 7:35am
dearest Jeff I see I missed
an introspective masterpiece
this is some deep thinking
leaving me with thoughts of my own
about my own inner workings..
you are brilliant my friend..
love Crim
an introspective masterpiece
this is some deep thinking
leaving me with thoughts of my own
about my own inner workings..
you are brilliant my friend..
love Crim
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23rd Jan 2018 6:18am