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Hypnagogia
To what life
will you lead me
leafily,
Oh, October bush guide
of post-equinox fading shades?
Sunk in the cornflower
behind the sun;
I'll make meals from
rich dusks
fostered fondly in the feeling
though not on draughts
from sapphire wines
(or strange grapevines...)
Yes,
I am "sitting comfortably"
though you stand so clamped
on a puzzling hose
A hallway into further
vaporous grays?
Remote limpid life
in tones of a wizard's cloak
a haunt of gaunt air
in me awoke
On the cusp of a trance...
my roots danced;
in these visions
it spoke
***
I don't disbelieve in fateful coincidences. I began this as another addition to a "Album Cover" competition, musing on a piece of strange and wonderful art that I love to stare at as a kid. My dad listened to the Moody Blues with me a TON, and On The Threshold Of A Dream was his favorite, and consequently, mine. It's sentimentality here at it's finest. I'm not going to lie, this whole thing has made me stupidly emotional. I began writing this on January 4th, it's taken me 4 days to complete. Ray Thomas (founding member) passed away on the 4th. MBs are renown for their weird and wonderfulness, and I believe some of that magic found it's place in my heart this week and led me to this. *Please search 'Hypnagogia' if you're unsure of what it means.
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