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Terrified
No poetic words
expressing my disdain
for heinous leadership
authorised to reign
Consumed with disgust
I've no tolerance
for ego driven ruin
forged by ignorance
A childish devil
approved to command
shall start a war
none can withstand
expressing my disdain
for heinous leadership
authorised to reign
Consumed with disgust
I've no tolerance
for ego driven ruin
forged by ignorance
A childish devil
approved to command
shall start a war
none can withstand
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Re. Terrified
5th Jan 2018 7:15pm
Nice breaks, great momentum, easy to read, focused, direct, great write
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Re: Re. Terrified
5th Jan 2018 7:27pm
Re. Terrified
5th Jan 2018 7:30pm
Oh it did, but I won't allow politics to become part of my critique... That wouldn't be in good taste, your poem is well written... As for the political science, that's a different conversation. 😉
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Re: Re. Terrified
5th Jan 2018 7:35pm
Much appreciated...not my normal subject matter at all. Just fearful for humanity. Thank you again lovely.
Re. Terrified
5th Jan 2018 7:52pm
Much obliged, check out my piece "The Silent Fall of Man" I think you'll like it
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Re. Terrified
6th Jan 2018 7:25pm
I'm just as scared as you my dear
truly... N I agree the arrogant ASS
in charge could be the death of many... Though I pray it never comes to pass...
truly... N I agree the arrogant ASS
in charge could be the death of many... Though I pray it never comes to pass...
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Re: Re. Terrified
6th Jan 2018 8:57pm
Thank you for your response dear friend. It is truly a frightening time when our President chooses to engage in a pissing contest about nuclear bombs! ...via twitter!
I pray for the same.
Bless
I pray for the same.
Bless
Re. Terrified
9th Jan 2018 00:33am
I really saw this poem and still do - I am tempted to say "Humanity is lost; save yourself!" but i am trying not to be an old cynical fart (lol)
excellent ink as always :-)))))))
excellent ink as always :-)))))))
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Re: Re. Terrified
9th Jan 2018 1:23pm
Thank you David as always. I do not think cynical and never "old fart" lol...just scary times, Much love my dear.
Re. Terrified
15th Jan 2018 6:54am
Sadly human history is full of lunatics...they come and go...alas their devastation lingers on. Brillant powerful piece of poetry Mel.
Shalom...Harry
Shalom...Harry
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Re: Re. Terrified
15th Jan 2018 7:12am
Many thanks Harry. Very sad indeed. Ready for this lunatic to go. Honoured by RL dear friend🙂. Much love.
Re. Terrified
15th Jan 2018 7:19am
powerful write here dearest poetess
I could feel your just anger..
love Raven
I could feel your just anger..
love Raven
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Re: Re. Terrified
15th Jan 2018 4:12pm
Thank you lovely Raven. I fear this may be an open ended poem as my disgust continues to grow. The read and response is much appreciated.
Much love.
Much love.
Re. Terrified
17th Jan 2018 1:11am
At the risk of invoking your ire, Mel, I see them all as evil. The only difference between this fellow and his predecessors is that he doesn't put out hit jobs on people. Seems to stay away from the pedo stuff. Who cares that he doesn't share his umbrella? Are his female entourage so dumb as to not understand he can't get his hair wet? Let them carry their own umbrellas. Other than that I agree with you. Even if I didn't, it's a great write.
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Re: Re. Terrified
17th Jan 2018 7:07am
Lol! Oh dear friend, I do not anger easily... you having an opinion surely would not ignite it. As far as the ignorance of his female entourage... beyond my comprehension! Who doesn’t want their own umbrella???
Much love.
Much love.
Re. Terrified
30th Jan 2018 7:35am
Mel, this is spot-on and I say amen to all you have written. I am sickened by the sight of our so called president, our buffoon in chief. His voice...fingernails on the chalkboard. You illustrate well this dangerous man-boy. Brava!
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Re: Re. Terrified
31st Jan 2018 7:37am