Abstention

For me there is no stable permanent self...just the inner battle between emotions...Minotaur's battling out each moment in my labyrinth... Great ink Mel.
Cheers...Harry  

"No permanent stable self"...how perfectly stated! Thank you for this precise description Harry. I appreciate the response and the compliment dear friend.
Bless...Mel

Mel I must tell you, your flow is absolutely flawless, n ur content
has the depth of oceans... :)

Wow! Thank you dear Poetik one. Very kind indeed:)  Your response reminds me of a quote...
"She is a mermaid
but approach her with caution
her mind swims at a depth
most would drown in" - unknown
LOL
Much appreciated response lovely:)

Really captures that struggle within.

Escape or assimilation
whispers crystal clear
taunting confessions
each presenting fear

Great verse, powerful stuff.

I thank you very much. It is indeed an internal struggle. Kind regards my friend:)
Mel

Mel, this piece, for me, is evocative of the "To be or not to be speech" from Hamlet. The inner turmoil is palpable. You have such a wonderful command of words...our best friends. Bravisima bella poeta!

Dear Gahddess,
Thank you for taking time to read and respond to several of my poems. Bless you and I am honoured. Yes definite inner struggle. This is why I love poetry. It can be quite cathartic! Much love dear friend.

Dearest Mel, thank you for letting us in to your mind clash. Mesmerizing and meaningful, not to mention beautifully penned.

3 days dry...David

Thank you lovely. Well done you. Not alone. Xxx