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From Behind
You always turn when it's about to happen.
Don't get me wrong, I love the view.
And how I can grip you in a variety of ways.
And get deeper.
But I never get to look you in the eye
when I start to erupt.
And I know that it isn't because you are shy.
I suspect it may have been another guy.
Don't get me wrong, I love the view.
And how I can grip you in a variety of ways.
And get deeper.
But I never get to look you in the eye
when I start to erupt.
And I know that it isn't because you are shy.
I suspect it may have been another guy.
Published 3rd Jan 2018
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3rd Jan 2018 8:01pm
Oh. It’s always another guy... and here’s hoping it’s not her husband, and that you don’t have an unhealthy proclivity for chasing married women ! Oh. The guilt would be more than enough to trigger that kinda response. 😐😮😂
Love the honesty forthcoming on this one ~ 😎🎈🦋🌹🌞
Love the honesty forthcoming on this one ~ 😎🎈🦋🌹🌞
Thankfully, that is not the scenario. More of an observational piece on the different things you notice about lovers. You may never ask, but sometimes I have a great curiosity about why people like what they do. And maybe a little fear. You are right! It is always another guy. I thought of saying more, but I'm glad I didn't, as I see that one can read very differently into the piece. Thanks for the comment!
3rd Jan 2018 8:39pm
I read this as a plea to be able to try "doing things differently" to what the woman through past relationship has become comfortable with in sex - although he admits he likes these. One of the adjustments that has to be made as umpteenth time couples develop their lovemaking styles.
4th Jan 2018 11:25am
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4th Jan 2018 11:40am
I love the multiple implications in this poem! As always, keeping me thinking dear Tenderloin. Great write!
5th Jan 2018 1:33am
5th Jan 2018 6:12am
Forgive if im wrong...
You are with a women who you suspect is cheating on you.she wont look at you during intimacy because she is thinking of someone else or the guilt and shame of her actions.
You are with a women who you suspect is cheating on you.she wont look at you during intimacy because she is thinking of someone else or the guilt and shame of her actions.
5th Jan 2018 11:09am
There is no wrong interpretation in the piece. I like to leave it open to the reader. Thanks for the read!
