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A Collection Of Lost Words
I keep losing the words
in the waves of insecurity
Pages carried away
in the tumultuous tides
Delicious vignettes
crafted to amuse
these faceless companions
along for the cruise
I've lost three today
neglecting to polish them
with any care
and when the time came to retrieve them
they were no longer there
Yes, I'm probably distracted
by what I need to escape
when I pen with the felt tip
to deviate
in the waves of insecurity
Pages carried away
in the tumultuous tides
Delicious vignettes
crafted to amuse
these faceless companions
along for the cruise
I've lost three today
neglecting to polish them
with any care
and when the time came to retrieve them
they were no longer there
Yes, I'm probably distracted
by what I need to escape
when I pen with the felt tip
to deviate
Published 4th Jan 2018
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4th Jan 2018 1:02am
this is an interesting poem, but I feel there is not enough imagery in it. The flow is a little off but of course you write how you want to write! To me, the poetry is talking about being lost for words in a society that does nothing but talk, and yet hardly ever listen.
4th Jan 2018 1:08am
Thanks for stopping by. I play with different approaches. I am still a student of imagery. And although I agree with your take on society, it really was about the poems that got lost.
4th Jan 2018 1:43am
5th Jan 2018 1:35am
4th Jan 2018 1:59am
You capture the bane of everyone that writes !
However, worry not over any insecurities and allow yourself to blossom, dear Tenderloin.
However, worry not over any insecurities and allow yourself to blossom, dear Tenderloin.
5th Jan 2018 1:36am
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4th Jan 2018 11:42am
I perceived this as being about writers block! It is true, sometimes we all lose words or fail to find them in the first place which can be frustrating! Great write dear!
5th Jan 2018 1:40am
So true, Star. The mind can only contain so much. And sometimes the infringement of time can snatch a good line. Very frustrating, indeed.
