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I Resolve
or, rather, considered
pledging some new start
to a regime
I've previously failed
Yet realized succeeding
isn't important;
striving is
So, whatever undertaking
this eve of new beginning
remember you cannot fail
in the attempting
There are only second
third, even fifty-fifth
chances to attain;
all a new prelude
despite the date
Living can be success
but I prefer to believe
trying keeps us alive
moving forward
technicolor dreaming
without strangling
on our own blood
counting mistakes
It's rising again
after resting a while
Heeding the call
" Don't give up "
Resolving to fight
even unto death;
because no matter how
you perceive you've failed . . .
each day you breathe
you've won
~
For my J, my Love and inspiration;
such unfailing Faith in Us. 💜
For all who are struggling with
loneliness or other personal
demons this day; You aren't alone. 💕
May 2018 Bless each of you at DUP
with much Love and Happiness.
May we all be more compassionate.🎊❤
pledging some new start
to a regime
I've previously failed
Yet realized succeeding
isn't important;
striving is
So, whatever undertaking
this eve of new beginning
remember you cannot fail
in the attempting
There are only second
third, even fifty-fifth
chances to attain;
all a new prelude
despite the date
Living can be success
but I prefer to believe
trying keeps us alive
moving forward
technicolor dreaming
without strangling
on our own blood
counting mistakes
It's rising again
after resting a while
Heeding the call
" Don't give up "
Resolving to fight
even unto death;
because no matter how
you perceive you've failed . . .
each day you breathe
you've won
~
For my J, my Love and inspiration;
such unfailing Faith in Us. 💜
For all who are struggling with
loneliness or other personal
demons this day; You aren't alone. 💕
May 2018 Bless each of you at DUP
with much Love and Happiness.
May we all be more compassionate.🎊❤
Written by
Ahavati
(Tams)
Published 31st Dec 2017
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Re. I Resolve
Anonymous
31st Dec 2017 9:50pm
Thank you, dear love, for being so consistently passionate
and well evolved..
don't think i wouldve have made it through the last ten
months, if it weren't for your words of encouragement
and a few others.
Hearting you and yours..
❤
and well evolved..
don't think i wouldve have made it through the last ten
months, if it weren't for your words of encouragement
and a few others.
Hearting you and yours..
❤
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May the New Year richly bless you with the insight to how beautiful you are, and how your presence here is equivalent to 17 ( if not more ) Spiltsunsets across our view. 🌞❤
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Anonymous
31st Dec 2017 9:57pm
we are pluralistic universes, arent we? ;)
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Re. I Resolve
31st Dec 2017 10:06pm
Ahavati, I love this. Such amazing and wise words to end 2017! Blessings to you in this new year.
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31st Dec 2017 10:07pm
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Anonymous
31st Dec 2017 11:31pm
Poems are only finished if we accept they can't be improved.
Ours is a poem I will never give up writing.
I Love You. 💜
Ours is a poem I will never give up writing.
I Love You. 💜
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Anonymous
31st Dec 2017 11:45pm
Mwuah 💋
I Love You back. 💜💕
💑
I Love You back. 💜💕
💑
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Re. I Resolve
1st Jan 2018 00:09am
Lovely, lovely, lovely, LOVE IT :)
"Living can be success
but I prefer to believe
trying keeps us alive"
This is a mini poem in itself :)
"Living can be success
but I prefer to believe
trying keeps us alive"
This is a mini poem in itself :)
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Thank you, AtoMikOne. ❤
May your year be Blessed with too much Love and Happiness ( if there is such a thing ). 🎉💕
May your year be Blessed with too much Love and Happiness ( if there is such a thing ). 🎉💕
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"fighting unto the death" can also signify "giving it up", to which there is no choice, per say.
No matta what we do, the "bottom line" is that all this stuff wee-think to be our sacred opinions of 'reality' is illusion man'ufactured in our precious little brain-machine. AND to inject Belief sets up oh so many conflicts & opportunities for forwarding the sad state of human Karma, because "belief" cements the duality prefigured in our brains that sustains the Ego that is so pervasive as "positive" in the individual, but adversely effects the Collective situation of OUR situation here on this spec of Time, called the human Earth.
Butt i'm probabbley wrong, right?......aiyeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!
g'odd bless you, dear.....no matta what wee call thee year
No matta what we do, the "bottom line" is that all this stuff wee-think to be our sacred opinions of 'reality' is illusion man'ufactured in our precious little brain-machine. AND to inject Belief sets up oh so many conflicts & opportunities for forwarding the sad state of human Karma, because "belief" cements the duality prefigured in our brains that sustains the Ego that is so pervasive as "positive" in the individual, but adversely effects the Collective situation of OUR situation here on this spec of Time, called the human Earth.
Butt i'm probabbley wrong, right?......aiyeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!
g'odd bless you, dear.....no matta what wee call thee year
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Danielson, the only thing I believe is that this illusion is a tangible experience we willingly chose. And Love. I believe in Love as the Source of everything, even its contrast that we recognize our true purpose in this third dimensional suit.
Everything else is merely display: fireworks ice cream, and apple pie.
God Bless you too. ❤
Everything else is merely display: fireworks ice cream, and apple pie.
God Bless you too. ❤
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6th Jan 2018 1:40am
Most of our purposes prove selfcenteredly moronic.......As A Whole, (A Collective! of human species), we are dominated by the selfist populism of Trumpism, (& his idol, Putan(ism)), which do not bode well for the "near future". All of Us "Love Will Conquer All" people are pissin in the wind........yeah, i'm one of 'em, but I will not imbue this illusion wit the toxic venom of I BELIEVE.
I'm sorry.......you needn't put up wit my nihilist bullshit.
I'm sorry.......you needn't put up wit my nihilist bullshit.
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Re. I Resolve
1st Jan 2018 7:57am
have i ever just said how epic you are? not the poetry, but you. always full of light, love, positivity & goddamn fairy dust :)
this is a wonderful read to start the year with.
blessings to you & yours
xo
this is a wonderful read to start the year with.
blessings to you & yours
xo
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1st Jan 2018 4:47pm
Thank you, Katja. ❤
That comment is my New Years blessing. I appreciate your presence greatly, and hope your New Year overflows with Love and Happiness. ❤💕
That comment is my New Years blessing. I appreciate your presence greatly, and hope your New Year overflows with Love and Happiness. ❤💕
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1st Jan 2018 10:37am
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1st Jan 2018 4:48pm
Thank You, Poetic One. I appreciate your responses and supportive friendship. May your New Year be blessed with an abundance of Love and Happiness. ❤💕
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1st Jan 2018 7:48pm
Ohhhh you already sold me with the vocabulary with "regime"
the feeling of pushing the boundaries, the limits and chances
chugging happiness and sunshine
believing , not it aliens but hope
personally my year is off to an abysmal start but here's hoping as this poem goes on
just maybe we can too.
great write Ahavati
your faces may change but the light is left on after dark to shine the shit of of bad stuff lol.
well penned ma'am.
the feeling of pushing the boundaries, the limits and chances
chugging happiness and sunshine
believing , not it aliens but hope
personally my year is off to an abysmal start but here's hoping as this poem goes on
just maybe we can too.
great write Ahavati
your faces may change but the light is left on after dark to shine the shit of of bad stuff lol.
well penned ma'am.
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3rd Jan 2018 1:50pm
Thank you, Samael.
That's what it's all about, maintaining the light despite our ever-changing face through experiences. Hopefully one day mine will settle in death looking as wise as it did old.
That's what it's all about, maintaining the light despite our ever-changing face through experiences. Hopefully one day mine will settle in death looking as wise as it did old.
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Anonymous
4th Jan 2018 6:28pm
beautifully inspiring words, work, excellent reasoning.
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5th Jan 2018 6:26am
lol, that's right to the last breath, lol u just bubbling, bless y'all, the vibrant Vati...
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11th Jan 2018 00:56am
Life's a struggle as it is, varying for each person. I love this poem and how you've portrayed that despite life being a constant battle, one musn't give up. As you've said: "each day you breathe
you've won."
Well done!
you've won."
Well done!
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11th Jan 2018 1:51pm