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What if God...?
What if god…
Had sent an angel down,
Who would teach us how to fly?
We would probably be overwhelmed;
With so much emotion I feel we would die.
What if god…
Haf sent an angel down,
Who could teach us how to sing?
So quickly we'd share, a song to
the people it would bring.
What if god…
Had sent an angel down,
Who would teach about forgiveness?
I’d practice it each day, lest I’d be remiss.
What if god…
Had sent an angel down,
Who would teach about true love
dropped to our knees we had better
be thankin' the heavens above.
What if god…
Had sent an angel down,
yet then he clipped her wings?
All mankind would truly benefit,
if given all of precious these things.
Published 29th Dec 2017
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29th Dec 2017 12:58pm
idk poe,
i like the optimism,
almost childlike
innocent...
... i think life
would lose its colour.
loved this tho,
gets me thinking
xoxox
love you heaps
i like the optimism,
almost childlike
innocent...
... i think life
would lose its colour.
loved this tho,
gets me thinking
xoxox
love you heaps
29th Dec 2017 2:05pm
Funny you mentioned childlike
I was much younger when I wrote it
this is one I found buried in the ole archives lol... Thank you my sweet mami, luv ya heaps too... :)
I was much younger when I wrote it
this is one I found buried in the ole archives lol... Thank you my sweet mami, luv ya heaps too... :)
29th Dec 2017 4:33pm
What if God
had sent an angel down
to teach us to be poets?
We would thank
the precious Lord
for the gift
he’d chosen for us.
I like this write - the gratitude expeessed and sweet joy of it brings a good feeling to me, thank you.
had sent an angel down
to teach us to be poets?
We would thank
the precious Lord
for the gift
he’d chosen for us.
I like this write - the gratitude expeessed and sweet joy of it brings a good feeling to me, thank you.
29th Dec 2017 11:47pm
Teach us to be poets...hell yea, that would be wonderful for real, I'd make sure I stole a spot at the front of the line though! lol
Truly, happy you enjoyed n grateful for ur
continued support :)
Truly, happy you enjoyed n grateful for ur
continued support :)
29th Dec 2017 8:07pm
What if God was one of us?
Just a slob like one of us
Just a stranger on the bus
Tryin' to make his way home?
Lyrics came to mind reading this!
Thank you for making my heart flutter.😘
Just a slob like one of us
Just a stranger on the bus
Tryin' to make his way home?
Lyrics came to mind reading this!
Thank you for making my heart flutter.😘
29th Dec 2017 11:50pm
It would be a trip! I'd be like, " Yo I gave that dude a dollar yesterday!! Lol...
Seriously, thank u sweet Rain, for pouring ur sweetness on my page appreciate it n u :)
Seriously, thank u sweet Rain, for pouring ur sweetness on my page appreciate it n u :)
Anonymous
29th Dec 2017 8:36pm
I loved this. You have such a beautiful spot in your heart.
Beth
Beth
29th Dec 2017 11:51pm
29th Dec 2017 10:28pm
It'd be heaven on earth..
Which we humans don't seem we deserve...
Deep & innocent indeed
Love<33
H
Which we humans don't seem we deserve...
Deep & innocent indeed
Love<33
H
29th Dec 2017 11:56pm
Agree with 100 my dear...n I greatly appreciate ur sweet thoughts n support always :)
29th Dec 2017 10:52pm
Mmm the world would be pretty perfect indeed.
But if more people had such a beautiful soul as you - I’d settle for that <3
But if more people had such a beautiful soul as you - I’d settle for that <3
30th Dec 2017 2:18am
Gosh, if u were going for melt...it worked in aces! Lol...seriously honored n humbled my sweet sweet lady... :)
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30th Dec 2017 2:21am
Yay! She commented! N I'm happy now lol
Truly, ur so wonderful, deeply grateful for the support n very sweet praise... :)
Truly, ur so wonderful, deeply grateful for the support n very sweet praise... :)
Anonymous
7th Jan 2018 3:24pm
Very strong presentation dearling, though i do not
know if anything of the sort subsists... but must say
how the strength here is felt, to make one think
love it
know if anything of the sort subsists... but must say
how the strength here is felt, to make one think
love it
21st Jan 2018 11:42am
Damn...I'm so sorry my sweetheart, didn't realize til now I never replied to this....
Thank-you, I'm ok with anyone's view
just grateful you shared ur thoughts on mine... :)
Thank-you, I'm ok with anyone's view
just grateful you shared ur thoughts on mine... :)
Anonymous
21st Jan 2018 11:46am
youre ok sweetie, please.. dont worry
i expect nothing from anyone
i expect nothing from anyone
21st Jan 2018 11:50am
Aaaaawww...ur so sweet... BUT now that u mention it, I do wanna spank u for that! Lol...I feel ripped off becuz u don't want comments! I mean seriously, I've had some really riveting emotions I needed to free, but couldn't! u meanie lol...JK...
Anonymous
21st Jan 2018 11:55am
lol, youll be alright ;)
12th Mar 2018 00:26am
You've brought to the table important questions and various "what ifs". I believe that God did send down an angel, the problem is that most humans are corrupt and evil that they can't see or refuse to acknowledge the beauty and love that we should all experience and share.
An excellent write!
An excellent write!
12th Mar 2018 9:07am
Well honestly, I believe you're right about the "most humans" part, especially when we see it's 2018 n yet we are STILL lifetimes away from where we should be
in terms of how we treat others with different skin color, belief, n status levels...
Truly appreciate you my dear... :)
in terms of how we treat others with different skin color, belief, n status levels...
Truly appreciate you my dear... :)
13th Mar 2018 3:54am
Thought provoking piece. Makes you take a look at yourself and what you would do. Nice!
14th Mar 2018 9:40am
Again, I'm grateful n again I agree n strife to be a Lil better than I was yesterday each day! :) appreciate u much...
