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Winter Whisper
The cold winter gale
Rushes by me with its tale
A sad mournful wail
Rushes by me with its tale
A sad mournful wail
Published 28th Dec 2017
| Edited 31st Dec 2017
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28th Dec 2017 5:47pm
28th Dec 2017 5:53pm
幸福和愛 ! Thank you! Appreiate your wishes. They will come true!
much love RoseJasmine
much love RoseJasmine
28th Dec 2017 7:18pm
29th Dec 2017 2:36am
28th Dec 2017 11:45pm
29th Dec 2017 2:38am
Thank you Lucius. Appreciate your comment and support.
much love RoseJasmine
much love RoseJasmine
29th Dec 2017 4:38am
oh i love it...rhyming haiku as the cold breeze whistles outside my window...
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
29th Dec 2017 11:24am
Anonymous
29th Dec 2017 4:54pm
Very clever RJ :)
30th Dec 2017 1:53am
Aww love your comment. Thank you for the nice words. I am honored!
much love RoseJasmine
much love RoseJasmine
Anonymous
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29th Dec 2017 7:14pm
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30th Dec 2017 1:57am
Thank you my dear. Glad it can give you such a feeling. It's nice to write a haiku. You should try....
much love RoseJasmine
much love RoseJasmine
30th Dec 2017 6:08pm
31st Dec 2017 00:20am
6th Jan 2018 11:05am
Thank you Soledad! Have been thinking of you for a while! So so glad to read your comment.
much much love
RoseJasmine
much much love
RoseJasmine
