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Painful phenomenon

You're dry socket after smoking
our Love was my extracted tooth

Written by samael

(Zaroff poetry)

Published 28th Dec 2017

#conflict #disappointment #memories #SelfReflection

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RoseJasmine

- Edited 28th Dec 2017 1:29pm

28th Dec 2017 1:26pm

This reads interesting...the imagery of "dry socket" and "extracted tooth" seems funny...yea it's so painful. Thank you for the refreshing ideas in this short piece...smile...

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smackdownraven

28th Dec 2017 3:55pm

excruciating metaphor dearest poet
at least your the tooth that got away..

great write..

~Raven

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AtoMikbomb

28th Dec 2017 11:42pm

Nice!!! Nothing like a concise, poetic punch in the balls <3

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