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Self Reflection
Painful phenomenon
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Painful phenomenon
You're dry socket after smoking
our Love was my extracted tooth
Written by
samael
(Zaroff poetry)
Published
28th Dec 2017
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#conflict
#disappointment
#memories
#SelfReflection
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Re. Painful phenomenon
RoseJasmine
- Edited 28th Dec 2017 1:29pm
28th Dec 2017 1:26pm
This reads interesting...the imagery of "dry socket" and "extracted tooth" seems funny...yea it's so painful. Thank you for the refreshing ideas in this short piece...smile...
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smackdownraven
28th Dec 2017 3:55pm
excruciating metaphor dearest poet
at least your the tooth that got away..
great write..
~Raven
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AtoMikbomb
28th Dec 2017 11:42pm
Nice!!! Nothing like a concise, poetic punch in the balls <3
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