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crosswords crumbling crucifix
Christmas caught me
like a rusty wire coat hanger
smacked
across the back
of my naked legs
friends i'd made
forgot to phone
fuck me in the end
i can get in trouble all on my own thank you
spitting
coughing up
yellow
creamy
chicken noodle soup chunks
their white chalk
drew my outline
on sewage pavement
in the gutter of night
i'd buy more
into your words
welps
if it brought me closer to your god
like a rusty wire coat hanger
smacked
across the back
of my naked legs
friends i'd made
forgot to phone
fuck me in the end
i can get in trouble all on my own thank you
spitting
coughing up
yellow
creamy
chicken noodle soup chunks
their white chalk
drew my outline
on sewage pavement
in the gutter of night
i'd buy more
into your words
welps
if it brought me closer to your god
Published 27th Dec 2017
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27th Dec 2017 7:42pm
28th Dec 2017 1:35pm
27th Dec 2017 7:43pm
dearest Samael
sounds like your not feeling well..
love the deeply sardonic ending..
love Crim
sounds like your not feeling well..
love the deeply sardonic ending..
love Crim
28th Dec 2017 1:36pm
i've been a bit sick this last week but i've not thrown up yet hahah. just an upper respiratory infection with lots of phlegm.
27th Dec 2017 7:48pm
this is a giant, new york state bird in the form of poetry.
you take no prisoners!
freaking love this. one of the best things I've read here in a while... makes me think of anna's writing, honestly couldn't give a better compliment than that.
you take no prisoners!
freaking love this. one of the best things I've read here in a while... makes me think of anna's writing, honestly couldn't give a better compliment than that.
28th Dec 2017 1:24pm
that is awesome and i highly appreciate that coming from you _shadoe_ , i enjoy your work quite insane.
27th Dec 2017 8:23pm
dearest poet
so gritty & raw
the images came to life
on the page..
fucking bad ass lines..
"their white chalk
drew my outline
on sewage pavement
in the gutter of night"
damn it you can write..
~Raven
so gritty & raw
the images came to life
on the page..
fucking bad ass lines..
"their white chalk
drew my outline
on sewage pavement
in the gutter of night"
damn it you can write..
~Raven
28th Dec 2017 1:38pm
