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Re. Coquette
"kiss her fingers with thorns"...very nice...I like that this is a Haiku...but I can also hear that phrase in a long poem too
bravo
love Jeff
bravo
love Jeff
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Re: Re. Coquette
23rd Dec 2017 7:18am
Jeff my dear, yea it will be extended to a long one soon. Thank you for the read and nice thought, You know me. Love to read your comment too....
much love RoseJasmine
much love RoseJasmine
Re. Coquette
23rd Dec 2017 1:18pm
uh oh...jealousy the ugly beast is awake. who is making you jealous dear? lol. great haiku
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Re: Re. Coquette
23rd Dec 2017 4:22pm
One day when I was watering a plant, my finger was pricked by a nearby cactus, and at the time a bee was flying around the plant. I have imagined the bee was jealous of me kissed by that cactus.
Dear Jay, because of your question, I have to tell the origin of the haiku.
Thank you so much for the thought.
much love RoseJasmine
Dear Jay, because of your question, I have to tell the origin of the haiku.
Thank you so much for the thought.
much love RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. Coquette
24th Dec 2017 7:29am
Dear Silence, it's just what it was all about. A simple incident was trurned into a haiku. Thank you for the read and comment.
much love RoseJasmine
much love RoseJasmine
Re. Coquette
23rd Dec 2017 4:37pm
the way you view the world is so beautiful and fragile, love the haiku
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Re: Re. Coquette
23rd Dec 2017 6:02pm
Fragile? You think so? I didn't know that, but thank you for reminding me.
Hmm I am thinking what to express in another way....
Thank you my dear friend for the nice comment.
much love RoseJasmine
Hmm I am thinking what to express in another way....
Thank you my dear friend for the nice comment.
much love RoseJasmine
Re. Coquette
28th Dec 2017 11:36am
having seen your plight
the bee
should have kissed the cactus
nice creative imagery
cactus also bear flowers
once in a while
in a marvelous style
the bee
should have kissed the cactus
nice creative imagery
cactus also bear flowers
once in a while
in a marvelous style
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Re: Re. Coquette
28th Dec 2017 12:07pm
Can you explain what " having seen your plight" means?
Dear Again, thanks for the read and comment.
much love RoseJasmine
Dear Again, thanks for the read and comment.
much love RoseJasmine
Re: Re. Coquette
30th Dec 2017 5:40am