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Oblit
Death notices
Ready for deliverance
Second guessing
Move on
Chiral concepts
Impart unfathomable
Second coming
Move off
Intraspecific
Wits end
Descent correlates
Move in
Death notices
Second Glance
The last dance
Move over
As a matter of fact
Stochastic relax
Custom fitting
Move along
The last chance
At the end of life's sentence
We hang like shreds
Move out
Ready for deliverance
Second guessing
Move on
Chiral concepts
Impart unfathomable
Second coming
Move off
Intraspecific
Wits end
Descent correlates
Move in
Death notices
Second Glance
The last dance
Move over
As a matter of fact
Stochastic relax
Custom fitting
Move along
The last chance
At the end of life's sentence
We hang like shreds
Move out
Published 21st Dec 2017
| Edited 22nd Dec 2017
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22nd Dec 2017 00:04am
dearest David
I love the word play
& flow of this write..
it definitely kept a beat
& sent a powerful message..
love Brenda
I love the word play
& flow of this write..
it definitely kept a beat
& sent a powerful message..
love Brenda
22nd Dec 2017 00:20am
Thanks Brenda, it's an old piece that I just modified before and after your comment so it might not read the same anymore. It's done now. Sorry about that.
Love to you...David
Love to you...David
22nd Dec 2017 00:22am
it's alright David I have to edit
frequently after I post
just because something about the poem
doesn't occur to me until later..
I will reread the poem :)
love Brenda
frequently after I post
just because something about the poem
doesn't occur to me until later..
I will reread the poem :)
love Brenda
