The Stink Of Your Teeth

I like this.  I also wonder what it is about.   There is a desire to ?   Please share!

Thank you! It kind of just...came to me. I was in a dark mood last night. I guess I was reflecting loosely on abusive people I used to know, but it's actually not tied to anything currently in my reality.

Sorry if that's lame, sometimes I just write :)

Not lame!  It was mysterious, as poetry sometimes is.

Your words, words, words, like a mind-gasm, erupting into my ear canal...

I liked it ! could be lyrics of a grindcore band! excellent!

Awesome! Thank you, that makes my day :)

Thanks for this, it seems very honest and reflective on people who think they can forcefully take from others.

Thank you for your thanks :) I've had some extensive sight into the minds of abusive people (I mean, truly sociopathic). I think the impressions of darkness lie forever in the subconscious of the abused, and possibly that's what I wrote here. Because I just sat and wrote, and often when we quit reaching for words, the right ones float up toward the surface and something more true happens.

The most amazing thing is that others recognize and connect with any of it. I thank you for that, but am concerned that anyone would see the reality of it, but such is our hurting world.

another gem....perhaps a bit lesser than your others....but, of course i'm jealous, so....HeeHaw

"geometric weaves
I'll die by the beat of your feet"- death can be found tapping to a tune of his liking

"siphon bankrupt blood
forge a glory
from gory "- i can see demons cashing in their blood chips at the casino

"tapestries of arteries
fresh fittings "- this takes me back to the DEMON NIGHT movie from tales of the crypt where demons were eating human remains sideways on the walls. ah the movies i should not have saw in my childhood lol.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Demon_Knight

"A spread of flesh on which to eat"-    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E92rCGBcSeg


I Love it.

So many thanks bro!

I'll need to look into that reference, I'm not familiar. Glad you enjoyed!

Sweetly twisted this menagerie  of words, rather delectable this is.

Thank you Sinister, greatly appreciated :)