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A Busy Buzzy Bee
Who came up with Poet this profession
passed it down for generations
therefore I ignite the kerosene lamp
curl up my torso at the table
with sheets of parchment
and a quill from the basement
When words trickle into poetry
I become a declared poetess
wearing a laurel crown
which not quite fit to my brows
searching for Emily Dickinson’s white robe
which not proper for me to cope
Like a bee collecting nectar
I look for inspiration
from the sound of silence
from the void of space
from the great soul’s voice
If not, I make up my own stories
Like a bee making honey
commenting on poems
replying to comments
thinking who I should follow
being a supportive follower
seems more critical than being a scribbler
On a bridle road
at the heavenly tavern
we are under the same light
some come in the day
others come at night
someone drives a fancy vehicle
I instead ride a humble camel
with a worn bell around its neck
when I come, I make lovely rattles
Right now under the kerosene lamp
I am shedding poetic tears
disguising as a poetess
dinking some inspiring tea
for I don’t really fit
I am just a busy buzzy bee
*Inspired by Samael's Busy Busy World
passed it down for generations
therefore I ignite the kerosene lamp
curl up my torso at the table
with sheets of parchment
and a quill from the basement
When words trickle into poetry
I become a declared poetess
wearing a laurel crown
which not quite fit to my brows
searching for Emily Dickinson’s white robe
which not proper for me to cope
Like a bee collecting nectar
I look for inspiration
from the sound of silence
from the void of space
from the great soul’s voice
If not, I make up my own stories
Like a bee making honey
commenting on poems
replying to comments
thinking who I should follow
being a supportive follower
seems more critical than being a scribbler
On a bridle road
at the heavenly tavern
we are under the same light
some come in the day
others come at night
someone drives a fancy vehicle
I instead ride a humble camel
with a worn bell around its neck
when I come, I make lovely rattles
Right now under the kerosene lamp
I am shedding poetic tears
disguising as a poetess
dinking some inspiring tea
for I don’t really fit
I am just a busy buzzy bee
*Inspired by Samael's Busy Busy World
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Re. A Busy Buzzy Bee
Anonymous
19th Dec 2017 2:54pm
Great visuals, time of the days...
we all bees collecting or
looking for nectar to collect!
I enjoyed this!
H
we all bees collecting or
looking for nectar to collect!
I enjoyed this!
H
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Re: Re. A Busy Buzzy Bee
Thank you Harold for the read and nice comment. Glad you enjoyed reading it. Yea, we are busy bees.....
much love RoseJasmine
much love RoseJasmine
Re. A Busy Buzzy Bee
19th Dec 2017 3:52pm
Lovely Jasmine...captures the spirit of inspiration and interaction very well
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19th Dec 2017 4:00pm
Re. A Busy Buzzy Bee
19th Dec 2017 4:23pm
community and support work both ways!! it helps you help it which helps you which helps it...
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Re: Re. A Busy Buzzy Bee
19th Dec 2017 4:52pm
Lol it's a funny way to define HELP....glad you came up the special way lol...
Thank you for the read and comment.
much love RoseJasmine
Thank you for the read and comment.
much love RoseJasmine
Re. A Busy Buzzy Bee
Anonymous
19th Dec 2017 11:35pm
Aww RJ - you sure do spread lovely rattles with your presence here, can’t think of a place you’d fit better :)
I hear you on this one, never wanting to neglect the beauty of others work which feeds such inspiration and deep thoughts, but it’s a balancing act for sure.
Much love <3
I hear you on this one, never wanting to neglect the beauty of others work which feeds such inspiration and deep thoughts, but it’s a balancing act for sure.
Much love <3
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20th Dec 2017 2:11am
Thank you for the nice comment and thought. I surely need your inspiration and encouragement. Your support means a lot to me.
much love RoseJasmine
much love RoseJasmine
Re. A Busy Buzzy Bee
"On a bridle road
at the heavenly tavern
we are under the same light
some come in the day
others come at night
someone drives a fancy vehicle
I instead ride a humble camel
with a worn bell around its neck
when I come, I make lovely rattles"
such wonderful lines to make the visuals speak....I love the change in perspective back and forth
love it my dear
love
-Jeff
at the heavenly tavern
we are under the same light
some come in the day
others come at night
someone drives a fancy vehicle
I instead ride a humble camel
with a worn bell around its neck
when I come, I make lovely rattles"
such wonderful lines to make the visuals speak....I love the change in perspective back and forth
love it my dear
love
-Jeff
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Re: Re. A Busy Buzzy Bee
21st Dec 2017 2:29am
Thank you my dear Jeff. I love the visuals too...they are fun. Appreciate your always support.
much love RoseJasmine
much love RoseJasmine
Re. A Busy Buzzy Bee
21st Dec 2017 9:34am
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21st Dec 2017 10:59am
I guess I do have ancestral genes. Thank you for the nice comment.
much love RoseJasmine
much love RoseJasmine
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21st Dec 2017 12:14pm
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21st Dec 2017 12:35pm
Re. A Busy Buzzy Bee
21st Dec 2017 3:07pm
it's been a minute since i've been back by your window.I love this write.
the 3rd stanza
"Like a bee collecting nectar
I look for inspiration
from the sound of silence
from the void of space
from the great soul’s voice
If not, I make up my own stories "- i really dig this searching, the void.
the kerosene lamp, the quill from the basement, the laurel crown, the white robe....it's just awesome.
excellent poem RoseJasmine
the 3rd stanza
"Like a bee collecting nectar
I look for inspiration
from the sound of silence
from the void of space
from the great soul’s voice
If not, I make up my own stories "- i really dig this searching, the void.
the kerosene lamp, the quill from the basement, the laurel crown, the white robe....it's just awesome.
excellent poem RoseJasmine
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21st Dec 2017 3:33pm
Dear Samael, I am honored to get your RL add. Actually this poem was inspired by your "Busy Busy World". Do you know what my favorite part is?
"someone drives a fancy vehicle
I instead ride a humble camel
with a worn bell around its neck
when I come, I make lovely rattles"
I was thinking to write someone "ride a fancy bike"...that imagery is super cool... but a fancy vehicle, the jeep, is good too. You inspired me again. Thank you so much for visiting me after "a minute"....
much love RoseJasmine
"someone drives a fancy vehicle
I instead ride a humble camel
with a worn bell around its neck
when I come, I make lovely rattles"
I was thinking to write someone "ride a fancy bike"...that imagery is super cool... but a fancy vehicle, the jeep, is good too. You inspired me again. Thank you so much for visiting me after "a minute"....
much love RoseJasmine
Re: Re. A Busy Buzzy Bee
21st Dec 2017 3:42pm
you rock Rose. i think you may be the first person that has written anything based off of my work before that i know of at least. you made my day.
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21st Dec 2017 4:07pm
You rock too Samael. Don't forget I am a buy buzzy bee and my work is to collect nectar...I can't resist any fragrance...glad I made your day :)
Re. A Busy Buzzy Bee
22nd Dec 2017 2:47am
You paint lucid imagery in your work. Leaving your readers with a lot to feed on.
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Re: Re. A Busy Buzzy Bee
22nd Dec 2017 2:55am
Thank you Lucius for the nice comment. Glad to read your comment as usual. Enjoy your visit very much!
much love RoseJasmine
much love RoseJasmine
Re. A Busy Buzzy Bee
22nd Dec 2017 5:19pm
"On a bridle road
at the heavenly tavern
we are under the same light
some come in the day
others come at night "
This poem is so beautifully written, it brought me next to you where you write. It brought me to a place where I feel I can be part of the other poets in this life and how we have a community that is so important to have.
Great write :)
at the heavenly tavern
we are under the same light
some come in the day
others come at night "
This poem is so beautifully written, it brought me next to you where you write. It brought me to a place where I feel I can be part of the other poets in this life and how we have a community that is so important to have.
Great write :)
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Re: Re. A Busy Buzzy Bee
22nd Dec 2017 5:38pm
We are in the same community and sharing the same light and vibe. We also exchange information that we think it's important to our lives. Thank you for joining this group and being my friend.
much love RoseJasmine
much love RoseJasmine