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My Walk In Darkness
There i am alone in my head
All i see is this demon
Tormenting who i am
She took me in gently
Her love is what I seeked
She kept on asking
Now baby girl here soon you won't feel anything all pain will go away I got you
Thats when her smile changed
That moment I knew I was her child forever
Only to be reconized by a few
All i see is this demon
Tormenting who i am
She took me in gently
Her love is what I seeked
She kept on asking
Now baby girl here soon you won't feel anything all pain will go away I got you
Thats when her smile changed
That moment I knew I was her child forever
Only to be reconized by a few
Published 18th Dec 2017
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18th Dec 2017 5:22am
I feel your pain..
"All i see is this demon
Tormenting who i am"
a very deep & haunting drug poem..
I recognize you I dance with the same demon..
love Crim
"All i see is this demon
Tormenting who i am"
a very deep & haunting drug poem..
I recognize you I dance with the same demon..
love Crim
18th Dec 2017 5:28am
She’s a scary nasty ass bitch
Hope that u and I everyone else can
Rip away her curse
Hope that u and I everyone else can
Rip away her curse
18th Dec 2017 6:11am
very chilling write
about the grip crystal can have
she is conniving
& finds her way in..
be strong dearest poetess
& know you don't walk alone..
~Raven
about the grip crystal can have
she is conniving
& finds her way in..
be strong dearest poetess
& know you don't walk alone..
~Raven
Anonymous
18th Dec 2017 8:23am
Such a lonely darkness to be in. Sending you hugs and hope you find the strength to make ‘her’ your child instead <3
18th Dec 2017 11:55am
You’ll never walk alone here amongst great poets
This poem I feel her twisting inside of me I dont touch drugs but alcohol is my poison and being twisted by my own haunts in my head of a lost love and all the hurt that came with it I still struggle inside to set these demons free,
It is good to see that someone with such talent can write about something and it can touch someone else on the other side of the world and it is written about one thing but resonates in other ways as demons are demons all the same some are easier to fight and let go. 😊
This poem I feel her twisting inside of me I dont touch drugs but alcohol is my poison and being twisted by my own haunts in my head of a lost love and all the hurt that came with it I still struggle inside to set these demons free,
It is good to see that someone with such talent can write about something and it can touch someone else on the other side of the world and it is written about one thing but resonates in other ways as demons are demons all the same some are easier to fight and let go. 😊
