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No restraints
It keeps resonating in my mind
What you said
“ a love that depends on a partners fails or success “
But we all have expectations ?
Right?
Like don't cheat ? Hit ? Or lie?
But really there just boundaries
At least for me it seems
Because I've been lied to and cheated on and stayed ,
I'm a hypocrite and insane
I love the heartache and pain
The darkness and rain
I love living in the night
I love the thrill of the fight
My heads missing screws but I don't want it tight
Restricting the free flow of hopes and might’s
I love the passion I love creation
I love fucking you like a savage
And your gushing orgasms
My heads lost in space
Thinking if this love without restraint
Does it really bring freedom
Or just more stress and pain
What you said
“ a love that depends on a partners fails or success “
But we all have expectations ?
Right?
Like don't cheat ? Hit ? Or lie?
But really there just boundaries
At least for me it seems
Because I've been lied to and cheated on and stayed ,
I'm a hypocrite and insane
I love the heartache and pain
The darkness and rain
I love living in the night
I love the thrill of the fight
My heads missing screws but I don't want it tight
Restricting the free flow of hopes and might’s
I love the passion I love creation
I love fucking you like a savage
And your gushing orgasms
My heads lost in space
Thinking if this love without restraint
Does it really bring freedom
Or just more stress and pain
Published 16th Dec 2017
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My heads missing screws but I don't want it tight
This is probably one if my favorite lines I have read so far. I like it so much I'm writing it in my quote notebook after I write this comment.
I like it because I think being sane just limits your mind to black and white.
Then these lines
Thinking if this love without restraint
Does it really bring freedom
Or just more stress and pain
I think love without restraint is a good thing in moderation.
This is probably one if my favorite lines I have read so far. I like it so much I'm writing it in my quote notebook after I write this comment.
I like it because I think being sane just limits your mind to black and white.
Then these lines
Thinking if this love without restraint
Does it really bring freedom
Or just more stress and pain
I think love without restraint is a good thing in moderation.
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17th Dec 2017 9:47am
love without restraint
Great thought provoking line
If ya got honesty, love and respect back and forth going on between two in a relationship
Restraint should then be lightly talked about
An understanding achieved through talk
Difficulties arise when second or third time around when thoughts on never going down that same mistake road again can unknowingly create many restraints thus creating issues within from the beginning
It's indeed a thought provoking write
Well done for getting it out there xD
Rose
Great thought provoking line
If ya got honesty, love and respect back and forth going on between two in a relationship
Restraint should then be lightly talked about
An understanding achieved through talk
Difficulties arise when second or third time around when thoughts on never going down that same mistake road again can unknowingly create many restraints thus creating issues within from the beginning
It's indeed a thought provoking write
Well done for getting it out there xD
Rose
Anonymous
18th Dec 2017 6:39am
your handwriting is passionately overwhelming...
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18th Dec 2017 2:19pm
Anonymous
19th Dec 2017 12:28pm
This holds many thought provoking questions for sure... Deep intense lines throughout.
Definitely a killer write :)
Definitely a killer write :)
