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Divinity
i ache for your hand print
on the tears
that fall from my yesterdays
upon the sunrise
of tomorrow's regret
deep is the sorrow
that flows from gray skies
& then carried away
on the backs of sparrows
who take flight inside my turmoil
causing my stomach to flutter
stirs the dark
that rears its face
in times of stress
then speaks the night
as it takes my breath
left hollow
i blow ashes on the wind
that gather in the recesses
of deep thought
a maze of hurt
where i find myself lost
i look to the constellations
for a star to guide me home
in the light's shine
i see divinity
the fates haven't deserted
they lead me onward
past the sorrow
finally i see hope on the horizon
& she is a beauty
her celestial grace
wraps round me
yesterday's tears
a faint memory
my eyes now opened
to the hand prints
the gods have left
on the soul deep inside me
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Re. Divinity
15th Dec 2017 4:54am
i ache for your hand print
on the tears
that fall from my yesterdays
upon the sunrise
of tomorrow's regret
deep is the sorrow
that flows from gray skies
& then carried away
on the backs of sparrows
who take flight inside my turmoil
causing my stomach to flutter
Big. Deep. Breath.
This truly took my breath away.... this is truly amazing!
~Wicked
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Re: Re. Divinity
thank you dearest Wicked One
for such a moving & beautiful comment..
I am truly touched..
your thoughts & visits are cherished..
love Crim
for such a moving & beautiful comment..
I am truly touched..
your thoughts & visits are cherished..
love Crim
Re. Divinity
Anonymous
15th Dec 2017 7:18am
Divine indeed
upon the sunrise
of tomorrow's regret
. It's knowing what you're doing presently is gong to kick your ass tomorrow.
then speaks the night
as it takes my breath
It is a gift to always read you my dear poet. You're insanely talented dear Brenda.
Beth
upon the sunrise
of tomorrow's regret
. It's knowing what you're doing presently is gong to kick your ass tomorrow.
then speaks the night
as it takes my breath
It is a gift to always read you my dear poet. You're insanely talented dear Brenda.
Beth
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Re: Re. Divinity
15th Dec 2017 7:24am
beautiful Beth
you understood that line
better then me..
yes you're so right about that
what i'm doing now
will indeed kick my ass tomorrow..
you understand so much
I thank you for your insight..
& for the love you show me
i'm deeply honored & humbled
you always brighten my nights..
love Brenda
you understood that line
better then me..
yes you're so right about that
what i'm doing now
will indeed kick my ass tomorrow..
you understand so much
I thank you for your insight..
& for the love you show me
i'm deeply honored & humbled
you always brighten my nights..
love Brenda
Re: Re. Divinity
Anonymous
15th Dec 2017 7:28am
You always leave me feeling comforted by your writing. For that I will always be grateful. I have to adjust my list. I need this on my RL,lol
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Re: Re. Divinity
15th Dec 2017 7:30am
aw Beth i'm blushing
your writing & presence
is such a rare pleasure
i'm so grateful you're here..
love you beautiful..
Brenda
your writing & presence
is such a rare pleasure
i'm so grateful you're here..
love you beautiful..
Brenda
Re. Divinity
15th Dec 2017 8:27am
Re: Re. Divinity
15th Dec 2017 9:24am
thank you graciously dearest poet
I am deeply humbled & honored by your comment..
love Crim
I am deeply humbled & honored by your comment..
love Crim
Re. Divinity
15th Dec 2017 12:16pm
Gorgeous poem. It truly steals your breath away. You write from your soul, and I admire that.
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Re: Re. Divinity
16th Dec 2017 2:35am
thank you beautiful Jade
for such a lovely comment
gifting me smiles :)
love Crim
for such a lovely comment
gifting me smiles :)
love Crim
Re. Divinity
15th Dec 2017 1:33pm
This is beautiful and comforting. I believe, just sometimes, we run into angels here on earth too.
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Re: Re. Divinity
16th Dec 2017 2:37am
thank you lovely Sadie
for such a beautiful comment
i'm deeply moved :)
love Crim
for such a beautiful comment
i'm deeply moved :)
love Crim
Re. Divinity
Anonymous
15th Dec 2017 2:46pm
There is little more I can add of value to what others before me here haven't already said. Your quill always cuts through the darkness with such incredible light. Though this began a bit forlorn, you claimed your own in the end. SO much strength and beauty in you, my beautiful Dark Angel. I always take something away from every piece you share. I do so love you, so very much
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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Re: Re. Divinity
16th Dec 2017 2:40am
thank you beautiful Willow
yes I was feeling sad
in the beginning of this write
& didn't want it to end that way
so with my soul I reached for the light..
I cherish your love & light on my pages..
love you..
Brenda
yes I was feeling sad
in the beginning of this write
& didn't want it to end that way
so with my soul I reached for the light..
I cherish your love & light on my pages..
love you..
Brenda
Re. Divinity
15th Dec 2017 8:16pm
There are human angels out there, fuck, and this coming from me (lol) but they are outhere :-))))
I surly hope this is true rather than imagination - you deserve such :-))
Big Huge Hugs :-))
I surly hope this is true rather than imagination - you deserve such :-))
Big Huge Hugs :-))
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Re: Re. Divinity
16th Dec 2017 2:41am
thank you David
i'm so happy you've met
some Earthbound angels
love & hugs..
Brenda
i'm so happy you've met
some Earthbound angels
love & hugs..
Brenda
Re. Divinity
Anonymous
15th Dec 2017 10:04pm
Brenda.. truly inspiring.. laced with hope, and positive energy.. i fucking dig this.. love you my sister..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. Divinity
16th Dec 2017 2:44am
Re. Divinity
16th Dec 2017 10:14pm
This poems name says it all.there is divinity in each line,the opening lines."I ache for your handprint
On the tears that fall from my yesterdays" its jst beautifully sombre.this whole poem jst works the longing and hope intretwine well,together.
Great write poet Crim
MARVELLOUS
On the tears that fall from my yesterdays" its jst beautifully sombre.this whole poem jst works the longing and hope intretwine well,together.
Great write poet Crim
MARVELLOUS
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Re: Re. Divinity
16th Dec 2017 10:21pm
thank you dearest Marvellous One
for such a beautiful comment
gifting me smiles :)
you have a soulful eye..
love Crim
for such a beautiful comment
gifting me smiles :)
you have a soulful eye..
love Crim
Re. Divinity
Anonymous
17th Dec 2017 1:54am
My love...if there is one thing I know, the gods will forever bring you hands and words of wisdom...you are a gift to us all with all you have the ability to see in both the light and also when shrouded in darkness...always in awe of your pen and your wise words...
I love you passionately
yours always & forever
xoxo Love Taryn
I love you passionately
yours always & forever
xoxo Love Taryn
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Re: Re. Divinity
17th Dec 2017 10:13pm
thank you my love
you are right they shine their light
through the dark & sorrow..
you are one of the brightest lights in my life..
I love & cherish you..
love Brenda
you are right they shine their light
through the dark & sorrow..
you are one of the brightest lights in my life..
I love & cherish you..
love Brenda
Re. Divinity
20th Dec 2017 11:42pm
"upon the sunrise of tomorrow's regret"....that is all you had to say...the rest is wonderful icing upon this short cake
delicious as always
Jeff
delicious as always
Jeff
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Re: Re. Divinity
21st Dec 2017 7:05pm
thank you dearest jeff
for the love you've shown
me on this write..
it's one of my favorites..
love Crim
for the love you've shown
me on this write..
it's one of my favorites..
love Crim