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...Suddenly
Seated high
atop my throne
in my
little fortress
of solitude,
I suddenly
remembered,
much
to my dismay,
that all I had
to eat
today
was a Big Mama
that I got
from the gas station
atop my throne
in my
little fortress
of solitude,
I suddenly
remembered,
much
to my dismay,
that all I had
to eat
today
was a Big Mama
that I got
from the gas station
Published 15th Dec 2017
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15th Dec 2017 2:09am
Dearest Crim,
you are simply too kind
Like a lot of the things I post (I'm going to avoid calling them "poems" here), I feel that I had little to do with what I typed.
Just kinda popped in my head all of the sudden
...but thank you 😏
you are simply too kind
Like a lot of the things I post (I'm going to avoid calling them "poems" here), I feel that I had little to do with what I typed.
Just kinda popped in my head all of the sudden
...but thank you 😏
15th Dec 2017 2:10am
well you brighten my days
with your creative thoughts :)
& I thank you..
love Crim
with your creative thoughts :)
& I thank you..
love Crim
16th Dec 2017 1:41am
This is so funny and cool Obs, I feel as if I'm sitting next to you but you could care less. Put cheese on mine if you have the time..
16th Dec 2017 9:10am
16th Dec 2017 3:36am
I like the beginning stanza, sounds very poetic . The rest was super cool. Thumbs up for the poem.
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i am a newbie here, u may read my poems but pls review only my latest poem .
16th Dec 2017 9:11am
