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Cheap Laugh
Holy days and Holy nights
don't do much for me
but the occasional holy afternoon
makes my world go 'round.
And every day I pose and pause
before the wake-up call
'cause, every morning I think
I have a reason to wake up...
but, every time I do, I forget it...
don't do much for me
but the occasional holy afternoon
makes my world go 'round.
And every day I pose and pause
before the wake-up call
'cause, every morning I think
I have a reason to wake up...
but, every time I do, I forget it...
Published 13th Dec 2017
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13th Dec 2017 11:49pm
Your poems are always loaded although the length..
So .. does this poem mean that you laugh at yourself at how you forget the reason to wake..?
Or laughing at your own bitter days..?
I am lost in thought to decipher this poem..
H
So .. does this poem mean that you laugh at yourself at how you forget the reason to wake..?
Or laughing at your own bitter days..?
I am lost in thought to decipher this poem..
H
14th Dec 2017 00:02am
I find comedy in a lot of things,
meaning I find a lot of things laughable
and more than any, my actions and reactions...:)
And, yes, I'm laughing at my own projection of bitterness.
Thank you for asking!
meaning I find a lot of things laughable
and more than any, my actions and reactions...:)
And, yes, I'm laughing at my own projection of bitterness.
Thank you for asking!
14th Dec 2017 00:07am
Not much these days find humor or any laughable reasons in things..
I find it is good to find a way to laugh at any times..
I see... hope the bitter sweetens dear poet :)
Love
H
I find it is good to find a way to laugh at any times..
I see... hope the bitter sweetens dear poet :)
Love
H
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14th Dec 2017 12:04pm
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- Edited 14th Dec 2017 8:31pm
14th Dec 2017 8:30pm
LMAO!! that's you love, that's all you...
and seeing fragments of myself as well ;)
youre too much
lol but i love it though, my ribs aren't any good,
the walls are thin
.. i think..
and others are hearing my outburst..
good, this was appeasing!
and seeing fragments of myself as well ;)
youre too much
lol but i love it though, my ribs aren't any good,
the walls are thin
.. i think..
and others are hearing my outburst..
good, this was appeasing!
14th Dec 2017 11:09pm
Humour is the essential essence in life...this is poem is deeply funny...great ink takis.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
15th Dec 2017 2:47am
very wry indeed dearest Takis
you have a dry humor
& say a lot with few words..
fantastic..
love Crim
you have a dry humor
& say a lot with few words..
fantastic..
love Crim
9th Oct 2021 6:37pm
I love how it's the simplicity in concept that delivers the deepest. Very well written. New follow :)
