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Acts of Love

The intoxication phase
 When attraction blossoms
 And we vow with hearts filled with joy
 To do what caring does
 Is the hidden bottom in Us
 "I love you because
 I needed the care"
 It was in your eyes,that the present tense wasn't there
 Perfection wasn't the promise
 Neither was concealing reality
 In the name of commitment
 We fall short.

I blame loneliness
 That blinding light
 That stuns you're eyes
 And tunnels you're vision.

U arrived
 As rain in the desert
 Cleaning the dust from my skin
 Glistening like a idolized God
 Worship brought me to my knees
 But now religion has left me
 And I am free to not believe



Written by MARVELLOUSJae
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