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Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
undulating faces sneer
& mirrors look back
deep into my soul it reaches
as i smear makeup on my visage
it cackles
& is smashed
into shards
each reflecting a demon
of my past
Reaching through my reflection
stabbing of a nature
nurturing the voices
that cackle at 3AM
kaleidoscopes couldn't cast cobwebs like this
i count the broken beige tiles
as bugs crawl out of my shoes
drywall dampening
why is this still happening
my screams
are monochrome
they echo
off yellowed daisy wallpaper
a vain attempt
to ward off the lunatic
that slides
from my crooked
vodka soaked smile
as my lies take flight
& hover
around a single bulb
dangling from a noose
that illuminates my truth
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Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
12th Dec 2017 9:00pm
Re: Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
12th Dec 2017 9:06pm
thank you graciously from us both dearest Obsessed One I am honored..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
12th Dec 2017 9:28pm
Damn that is some image that just cant be shook off. I find, if we truly learn from our mistakes and don't repeat them, those demons eventually diminish. They get bored, so to speak. Very detailed imagery. Nicely done.
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Re: Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
12th Dec 2017 9:33pm
thank you graciously from us both dearest Sadie
I love your insight on this poem
gives me something to think about..
love Crim
I love your insight on this poem
gives me something to think about..
love Crim
Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
Anonymous
12th Dec 2017 10:09pm
Fantastic. I read it over twice. It is a great day when two good poets collaborate and it has nothing to do with erotica. Don't get me wrong. I love the erotica collaborating. It's fantastic however to read a collaboration of demons.
Exciting piece you two. Hats🎩off you two!
Beth
Exciting piece you two. Hats🎩off you two!
Beth

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Re: Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
12th Dec 2017 10:19pm
thank you graciously
from us both beautiful Beth
I was in a dark mood
& Samael obliged me
coming up with some
wickedly killer lines..
so happy you enjoyed this offering
I deeply cherish you..
& love your dark writes..
love you lady..
Brenda
from us both beautiful Beth
I was in a dark mood
& Samael obliged me
coming up with some
wickedly killer lines..
so happy you enjoyed this offering
I deeply cherish you..
& love your dark writes..
love you lady..
Brenda
Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
13th Dec 2017 00:13am
Such a great collaboration..
killer lines.
Darkness fulfilled greatly.
<3
H
killer lines.
Darkness fulfilled greatly.
<3
H
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Re: Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
13th Dec 2017 2:39am
Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
13th Dec 2017 00:45am
Re: Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
13th Dec 2017 2:41am
Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
13th Dec 2017 7:02am
Very dark and scary. I wanted to run like hell from this experience. Great collaboration.
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Re: Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
15th Dec 2017 1:10am
thank you dearest David
from us both
for taking this dark ride
& for a great comment..
love Crim
from us both
for taking this dark ride
& for a great comment..
love Crim
Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
13th Dec 2017 7:08pm
Re: Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
15th Dec 2017 1:10am
Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
13th Dec 2017 7:32pm
Lots of strong, hallucinatory imagery, skillfully blended. A very fine collab with real chemistry. My praise is Kodachrome...
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Re: Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
15th Dec 2017 1:11am
Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
13th Dec 2017 11:17pm
Re: Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
15th Dec 2017 1:12am
Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
Anonymous
14th Dec 2017 3:21pm
Your voices weave in and out of each other so flawlessly that it's difficult to find the seams. That last stanza is incredibly potent! Well done, both of you! I do so love you, my beautiful Dark Angel, so very much
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow

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Re: Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
15th Dec 2017 1:14am
thank you beautiful Willow
from us both
I owe the talented Samael
for the seamless way this turned out
he was a pure joy to write with..
I love you..
Brenda
from us both
I owe the talented Samael
for the seamless way this turned out
he was a pure joy to write with..
I love you..
Brenda
Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
Anonymous
16th Dec 2017 10:52pm
Wow, your voices clearly sing from the same sheet. This is just perfect in every way.

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Re: Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
16th Dec 2017 10:55pm
thank you graciously
from us both
beautiful Sophie
Samael was a joy to write with..
love Crim
from us both
beautiful Sophie
Samael was a joy to write with..
love Crim
Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
Anonymous
17th Dec 2017 1:40am
Such a wonderful collaboration and meeting of the minds my love! I was drawn immediately into the darkness the two of you weaves here and the flow was impeccable. Hats off to the both of you!! Well done!!!
I love you wildly!
yours always & forever
xoxo Love Taryn
I love you wildly!
yours always & forever
xoxo Love Taryn

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Re: Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
17th Dec 2017 10:20pm
thank you my love from us both
Samael was a pure joy to write with
this write came with ease
one of the easiest i've done..
I love you passionately..
love Brenda
Samael was a pure joy to write with
this write came with ease
one of the easiest i've done..
I love you passionately..
love Brenda
Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
20th Dec 2017 11:22pm
this lit up my evening...very smooth duet....both voices as one intent...
-J
-J
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Re: Re. Electrocuted Monochrome~with the talented Samael
21st Dec 2017 7:07pm
thank you dearest Jeff
your comment gifted me smiles :)
Samael was a joy to write with..
love Crims
your comment gifted me smiles :)
Samael was a joy to write with..
love Crims