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Milk-jazz star
Apple blossom sticks
to rolling saps of mable syrup
it shook your twlight stars
the milky-jazz texture
gave you a place in the world
some place where you could feel
The tropical low clouds
grazing upon the troposphere
palm trees soon give way to lamp posts
chased the feeling 'round morning stars
night time is always a fading dream
idle hands loiter the devils playground
Glorious crystal clear seas
give way to landfill sites and factory stacks
on which the nights portait is painted
Gouache and violet peels of morning sky
As you slowly depart from me
the buzz of an opiate cushioning the agony
the pain, the travesty, it gives me hope
that something is out there for me
You slowly descend from me
once your in the arms of your apparition
she fades away like your ashes on your grave
your just left holding her eternity ring
to rolling saps of mable syrup
it shook your twlight stars
the milky-jazz texture
gave you a place in the world
some place where you could feel
The tropical low clouds
grazing upon the troposphere
palm trees soon give way to lamp posts
chased the feeling 'round morning stars
night time is always a fading dream
idle hands loiter the devils playground
Glorious crystal clear seas
give way to landfill sites and factory stacks
on which the nights portait is painted
Gouache and violet peels of morning sky
As you slowly depart from me
the buzz of an opiate cushioning the agony
the pain, the travesty, it gives me hope
that something is out there for me
You slowly descend from me
once your in the arms of your apparition
she fades away like your ashes on your grave
your just left holding her eternity ring
Published 6th Dec 2017
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6th Dec 2017 5:24pm
6th Dec 2017 6:18pm
Thank you for the comment... I like the things what leave me wanting more...
night time is always a fading dream
idle hands loiter the devils playground" favorite lines
idle hands loiter the devils playground" favorite lines
7th Dec 2017 6:56am
a work of art..
"Glorious crystal clear seas
give way to landfill sites and factory stacks
on which the nights portait is painted
Gouache and violet peels of morning sky"
you truly painted a picture
on what this high must feel like..
outstanding..
love Crim
"Glorious crystal clear seas
give way to landfill sites and factory stacks
on which the nights portait is painted
Gouache and violet peels of morning sky"
you truly painted a picture
on what this high must feel like..
outstanding..
love Crim
7th Dec 2017 7:05am
Thank you for your kind words, they mean a lot to me in this troubling time...
