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Sated
Fatigue, foul mood, cold day
second thoughts
circumstance matters not;
He doesn't stop
kneading dough
On the contrary
turns up the heat
bakes negativity away
its sticky-soft doubt rising
into a sweetly hardened crust
Believable
Beautiful, delectable
our tongues sated
in afterwarmth
of hot buttered loaves
melting between our lips
dribbling down our chin
~
True story, no bull crap
For J; the most remarkable
baker of Love I've ever known.
🍞💜
second thoughts
circumstance matters not;
He doesn't stop
kneading dough
On the contrary
turns up the heat
bakes negativity away
its sticky-soft doubt rising
into a sweetly hardened crust
Believable
Beautiful, delectable
our tongues sated
in afterwarmth
of hot buttered loaves
melting between our lips
dribbling down our chin
~
True story, no bull crap
For J; the most remarkable
baker of Love I've ever known.
🍞💜
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Re. Sated
6th Dec 2017 2:10am
This is a beautifully written piece. Nothing better than being sated and satisfied with that one person you love. I really felt this one.
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Re: Re. Sated
6th Dec 2017 1:36pm
Re. Sated
Anonymous
6th Dec 2017 2:20am
Mmmmmmmmm ...... I'm hungry now after reading this!
Buttering me up, eh? [nonsense]
Thank you for dedicating such a dewicious poem to me.
💋💜🍞
Buttering me up, eh? [nonsense]
Thank you for dedicating such a dewicious poem to me.
💋💜🍞
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Re: Re. Sated
6th Dec 2017 1:38pm
Re. Sated
Anonymous
6th Dec 2017 5:00am
Yummy dear A. Your love play with each other is adorable.
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Re. Sated
6th Dec 2017 6:33am
Kitchens can be hot places in more senses than one. Nothing like a miserable day outside to get cooking inside!
Your footnote reminded me of the character of "Mrs Bun the Baker's Wife" in the card game Happy Families!
Your footnote reminded me of the character of "Mrs Bun the Baker's Wife" in the card game Happy Families!
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Re: Re. Sated
6th Dec 2017 1:40pm
I must admit I've never played that game, but greatly appreciate the humor in her name!
Thanks, Solomon.
Thanks, Solomon.
Re. Sated
6th Dec 2017 5:53pm
Re: Re. Sated
7th Dec 2017 1:40am
Then you're lucky to have tasted it even once during your lifetime. 🍞
Thanks, Rowan. Good to see you back in these parts.
Thanks, Rowan. Good to see you back in these parts.
Re. Sated
6th Dec 2017 10:41pm
Re. Sated
7th Dec 2017 6:14pm
wow that is some tribute - I think I'll start calling Johnny Blaze - Lucky Johnny Blaze (lol)
Loved this write :-))))
Loved this write :-))))
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Re: Re. Sated
8th Dec 2017 2:15pm
Re. Sated
Anonymous
7th Dec 2017 7:33pm
You two.. ..are so so preciously rare,
💘🦋
💘🦋
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Re: Re. Sated
8th Dec 2017 2:15pm
Re. Sated
8th Dec 2017 10:08pm