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in this
this is time
replaced
body stretch across open space
eclipse of race
justice falling all over the place
i am fine.
pleasantly unrefined. morality of die i confine my actions
and roll
in questions
caught in boxes
clever in the emotions
analyzing distraction
pouring in daydream
and im caught in fences of standards
conformity
normality
stories
of never getting out of
whats to come of me
i cant decide
whether to run of hide
i realize
i am already
in this
replaced
body stretch across open space
eclipse of race
justice falling all over the place
i am fine.
pleasantly unrefined. morality of die i confine my actions
and roll
in questions
caught in boxes
clever in the emotions
analyzing distraction
pouring in daydream
and im caught in fences of standards
conformity
normality
stories
of never getting out of
whats to come of me
i cant decide
whether to run of hide
i realize
i am already
in this
Published 3rd Dec 2017
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3rd Dec 2017 1:13am
3rd Dec 2017 10:48am
"Justice falling all over the place
I am fine
pleasantly unrefined"
It takes skill to say so much with so little..I like how your words are heavy and light at the same time.
U put words together well,with this constant flickering of controlled emotion.U did good.
I am fine
pleasantly unrefined"
It takes skill to say so much with so little..I like how your words are heavy and light at the same time.
U put words together well,with this constant flickering of controlled emotion.U did good.
8th Dec 2017 4:14am
10th Dec 2017 2:19pm
This is very special and beautiful. The all over piece is so well focused on the theme "in this". It has been expressed delicately. Love love this so much my dear.
These phrases surprise me: "morality of die i confine my actions", "roll in questions", "caught in boxes", "im caught in fences of standards", "conformity",
"normality". Yeah, there are certain rules we have to follow no matter what we are willing to do or not......the most important thing is "i am fine!"
EXCELLENT WRITE!!!
much love RoseJasmine
These phrases surprise me: "morality of die i confine my actions", "roll in questions", "caught in boxes", "im caught in fences of standards", "conformity",
"normality". Yeah, there are certain rules we have to follow no matter what we are willing to do or not......the most important thing is "i am fine!"
EXCELLENT WRITE!!!
much love RoseJasmine
10th Dec 2017 11:49pm
Thank you so much for the beautiful comment. It meant so very much to me to read it today on my break at work.
I am so fascinated by your works..... interesting, mystical, melancholy and diversified....wish you a good time at work.
much love Rosejasmine
much love Rosejasmine
