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melchizedek's fireplace--=I
Orwellian manipulation of words and perception
Controls the greater mind through lightening dissension
Felling trees as falling knees on a lodestone of power
As we walk the timeless beach during the geo solar hour...
Through the proxy of God shines the cosmic mentor
As a flaming sword blocks the garden to enter
So a flaming spirit human conscious rendered
Sits the flaming orb Helio gravity centered...
A micro altar that will never die
The macro fire that will ever rise...
Burns the oil to the flame as a birthless pain
So the blood to the spirit is a deathless reign
Libations in blood turned the wine of atrocity
"From the dark of ignorance to the light of philosophy"...
In the sarcophagus of the soul
Sits our mind's ethereal mold
While seven planets to seven glands
Bring Chakra blooms to spinal lands...
The heart of seven parts in a vortex of time
Old work to clean the grit from the sanded mind
Spinal fire shooting down from the triangular room
Focal point now fixed with a mental zoom...
Newborn skull with open crown of the sky
Clairvoyant state the invisible worlds on high
Walapurgis night to bring a Goethe fright
Now chained a thousand years to Milton's false light...
Parsifal's magician in the garden of illusion
The castle of Klingsor in operatic conclusion
Judas the betrayer with backbiting sting
The scorpion player in a demonic scene....'>
Controls the greater mind through lightening dissension
Felling trees as falling knees on a lodestone of power
As we walk the timeless beach during the geo solar hour...
Through the proxy of God shines the cosmic mentor
As a flaming sword blocks the garden to enter
So a flaming spirit human conscious rendered
Sits the flaming orb Helio gravity centered...
A micro altar that will never die
The macro fire that will ever rise...
Burns the oil to the flame as a birthless pain
So the blood to the spirit is a deathless reign
Libations in blood turned the wine of atrocity
"From the dark of ignorance to the light of philosophy"...
In the sarcophagus of the soul
Sits our mind's ethereal mold
While seven planets to seven glands
Bring Chakra blooms to spinal lands...
The heart of seven parts in a vortex of time
Old work to clean the grit from the sanded mind
Spinal fire shooting down from the triangular room
Focal point now fixed with a mental zoom...
Newborn skull with open crown of the sky
Clairvoyant state the invisible worlds on high
Walapurgis night to bring a Goethe fright
Now chained a thousand years to Milton's false light...
Parsifal's magician in the garden of illusion
The castle of Klingsor in operatic conclusion
Judas the betrayer with backbiting sting
The scorpion player in a demonic scene....'>
Written by
runaway-mindtrain
Published 2nd Dec 2017
| Edited 21st Apr 2018
Author's Note
inspired by the teachings:
Rudolf Steiner
Manly P. Hall
John Dee
Rudolf Steiner
Manly P. Hall
John Dee
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Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
2nd Dec 2017 1:44pm
Such imagery ... a feel of sacred and profound ... wonderful way to start my day. Bravo my dear.
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Re: Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
3rd Dec 2017 7:54am
I am so glad to have poetry breakfast ready for my dearest...
love always
Jeff
love always
Jeff
Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
2nd Dec 2017 6:31pm
dearest Jeff this is a spiritual masterpiece
you are clearly a man of great vision..
lines like this blew my mind..
"Newborn skull with open crown of the sky
Clairvoyant state the invisible worlds on high"
in awe my friend..
love Brenda
you are clearly a man of great vision..
lines like this blew my mind..
"Newborn skull with open crown of the sky
Clairvoyant state the invisible worlds on high"
in awe my friend..
love Brenda
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Re: Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
3rd Dec 2017 7:58am
my lovely Brenda...you are so so supportive of my craziness...
love you intensely
Jeff
love you intensely
Jeff
Re: Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
3rd Dec 2017 8:01am
not crazy at all
divine inspiration dearest Jeff
truly in awe of your revelations..
love Brenda
divine inspiration dearest Jeff
truly in awe of your revelations..
love Brenda
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Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
3rd Dec 2017 00:40am
Every single lyric of this seems to hold divine meaning..
Although it seems ideas are scattered (it may be lack of my comprehension)
I greatly appreciate the depth and richness of words and knowledge you seem to bring in a simple piece of poem..
I pay you my respects and admiration with my lack of knowledge..
Love
H
Although it seems ideas are scattered (it may be lack of my comprehension)
I greatly appreciate the depth and richness of words and knowledge you seem to bring in a simple piece of poem..
I pay you my respects and admiration with my lack of knowledge..
Love
H
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Re: Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
3rd Dec 2017 8:02am
My precious Hanuel...you continue to see so much...it is a crazy poem about an ancient order of Melchizedek....far out people....very cool....and difficult to explain....the poetic form is actually the only way to talk of such...and you already sense it...
love Jeff
love Jeff
Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
3rd Dec 2017 11:08pm
I can see Blake and Ginsberg bowing to this masterpiece. Bravo!
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
4th Dec 2017 1:41am
I am very influenced by Blake...his poetic work...paintings and mysticism are wonderful....thanks for the huge compliment....
much appreciation my friend Jeff
much appreciation my friend Jeff
Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
Such holy spiritual write only can be put in the altar to worship.... I want to tip my cap to you dear Jeff.
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
5th Dec 2017 7:10pm
Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
Anonymous
8th Dec 2017 11:09pm
Left in absolute awe of this one.
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Re: Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
9th Dec 2017 1:56am
Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
10th Dec 2017 11:15pm
From Faust to Wagner and beyond...a poem of genius proportions R....a philosopher's poem...an epic!
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
11th Dec 2017 00:18am
Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
12th Dec 2017 2:20am
Amazing! Powerful with a good flow. Excellent word choice and a strong subject. Nicely done!
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Re: Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
12th Dec 2017 2:50am
thank you...usually write to a mental drum set...this one was a prog arrangement...this cult order is ancient with powerful wide band ideas...cool mystics...
Jeff
Jeff
Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
Anonymous
15th Dec 2017 7:41pm
Just amazing hun..!
one day, i will be free to crawl upon brain lobes lol
love it
one day, i will be free to crawl upon brain lobes lol
love it
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Re: Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
15th Dec 2017 9:57pm
Will I get to root around in your brain garden as well?
Thanks for the read... I really appreciate it...
Much love
Jeff
Thanks for the read... I really appreciate it...
Much love
Jeff
Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
20th Dec 2017 11:57pm
I found this very inspirational, like we can all find freedom. Great poem.
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Re: Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
I am very glad you found substance that inspires...the biggest compliment ..thank you very much
-Jeff
-Jeff
Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
20th Dec 2017 11:59pm
Phenomenal. The eloquence and Rythm of this piece pursues deeper thought, more relaxed state, to digest it. It renders a delightful journey, the spiral out and back. The musical quality of the stanzas hold the focus with a premeditated calm.
Musings of a zen master.
Musings of a zen master.
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Re: Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
21st Dec 2017 00:03am
Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
22nd Dec 2017 2:04pm
this is the most marvelous madness, j
you make esoteric concepts quite accessible in you verses, the links clear and still shrouded enough so i fell as tho i'm delving into the wondrousness of the unexplained
so much vodka went into the making of this comment
but i thoroughly enjoyed the read
x
~ k
you make esoteric concepts quite accessible in you verses, the links clear and still shrouded enough so i fell as tho i'm delving into the wondrousness of the unexplained
so much vodka went into the making of this comment
but i thoroughly enjoyed the read
x
~ k
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Re: Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
23rd Dec 2017 00:22am
thank you my beautiful friend....don't fret on the chemical assistance....a measure of weed was sacrificed for this poetic ponderance... my craziness helps...
much love
Jeff
much love
Jeff
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25th Dec 2017 8:01am
Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
27th Dec 2017 5:26pm
Okay, I see ya and feel the beautiful madness of your pen. 😘 Amazing piece!
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27th Dec 2017 8:29pm
Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
24th Jan 2018 2:48am
Thanks for contributing this poem to my competition! It is an interesting take on philosophy.
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Re: Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
24th Jan 2018 2:57am
Thanks for setting up the competition....I really appreciate the read
Jeff
Jeff
Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
25th Jan 2018 5:58am
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25th Jan 2018 7:07am
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Re: Re. melchizedek's fireplace--=I
9th Jun 2019 1:42pm
Many such writers have brought the old ways into the new...
love always
Jeff
love always
Jeff