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Tormented Soul
Static in madness
silence echoes
in chambers of the mind
lurid pasts haunt
when living with ghosts
sure fate assigned
pervasive darkness
fosters foreboding
rendering blind
lifeless limbs
dare not protest
steel chains that bind
silence echoes
in chambers of the mind
lurid pasts haunt
when living with ghosts
sure fate assigned
pervasive darkness
fosters foreboding
rendering blind
lifeless limbs
dare not protest
steel chains that bind
Published 26th Nov 2017
| Edited 27th Jan 2018
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26th Nov 2017 5:36pm
Well that is exactly how I feel right now... Makes me wish I had written this!
Excellent ink Mel!!!
JJ
Excellent ink Mel!!!
JJ
26th Nov 2017 5:59pm
I thank you very much for the read and compliment but sorry to hear you are feeling it! Sending well wishes:)
Mel
Mel
27th Nov 2017 3:47am
Ok the second dark ink in a row... think I need to binge on some cartoons now!
lol
lol
15th Dec 2017 2:22am
28th Nov 2017 9:29am
sadly this is very relatable - but it's such a beautiful construct - precise, direct and filled with just the right amount of dark :-))
Excellent ink as always :-)))
Excellent ink as always :-)))
15th Dec 2017 2:23am
Thank you David. I always appreciate your support and know that you "get it". Much love my dear.
Mel
Mel
14th Dec 2017 11:05pm
15th Dec 2017 2:24am
Thank you kindly. I love the alliteration in your response:) Thanks for reading and taking the time to respond.
Mel
Mel
1st Mar 2018 9:34pm
