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Autumn I : Sacred Geometry of Geese
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Migrational flight squadron
heralding spring and autumn
an aerodynamic measuring
of spacial relationships
into equal fields of vision
Silhouetted formation defining
conditioned patterning
energy conservation
innate maneuvering
instinctual direction
Universal teamwork
Wingtip vortices
gaining ground
under the sun;
Stationary humans
gawking from below
~
Migrational flight squadron
heralding spring and autumn
an aerodynamic measuring
of spacial relationships
into equal fields of vision
Silhouetted formation defining
conditioned patterning
energy conservation
innate maneuvering
instinctual direction
Universal teamwork
Wingtip vortices
gaining ground
under the sun;
Stationary humans
gawking from below
~
Published 26th Nov 2017
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26th Nov 2017 3:10pm
26th Nov 2017 3:11pm
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26th Nov 2017 4:19pm
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26th Nov 2017 4:29pm
Anonymous
26th Nov 2017 7:22pm
Always fascinating to watch. Instinct is the first word that leaps to mind -
geese epitomize it ....
.... while most humans, the opposite. It is no wonder we gawk, marveling at unseen forces we comprehend little of. Your use of "stationary" intimates that humans don't have anywhere to go, because we don't listen and seek guidance within.
geese epitomize it ....
.... while most humans, the opposite. It is no wonder we gawk, marveling at unseen forces we comprehend little of. Your use of "stationary" intimates that humans don't have anywhere to go, because we don't listen and seek guidance within.
26th Nov 2017 9:30pm
"Your use of "stationary" intimates that humans don't have anywhere to go, because we don't listen and seek guidance within."
Exactly! You hit the nail on the head. ( LOL! This about someone expertly building our Universe House ). Humans are always looking "out there" somewhere. . .not realizing they're the Universe inside out; the contrast of Spirit in flesh.
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Exactly! You hit the nail on the head. ( LOL! This about someone expertly building our Universe House ). Humans are always looking "out there" somewhere. . .not realizing they're the Universe inside out; the contrast of Spirit in flesh.
💜💑
26th Nov 2017 7:42pm
Homegirl, you are so masterful with language. Your wordplay is subtle and almost playful here! You inspire me :)
26th Nov 2017 9:32pm
Ha! I thought I was the only one who used "Homegirl"! That's a kickass response; Thank you!
26th Nov 2017 9:55pm
so we just had goose for lunch
and now I feel bad
about the bird,
although maybe not the lunch ..
and now I feel bad
about the bird,
although maybe not the lunch ..
27th Nov 2017 1:31am
Anonymous
27th Nov 2017 6:00am
Your kaleidoscope of cultured worlds you paint for your reader is impeccable.
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27th Nov 2017 1:39pm
28th Nov 2017 9:39am
I really enjoyed this beautifully crafted poem - I think I would like to be inside your head for a day I am so sure like this poem I would be inspired :-)
28th Nov 2017 12:57pm
Thank you, David. But I'm afraid you'd run away. . . screaming if inside my head for one moment! 🏃
