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Biopsychology - Depression's Doxology
Nebulous neurons shiver
lucent little snakes
shake
synapses weary of transporting life
aching of staying awake
Flares fire
aggressive & finite
from firefly transmitters
only moaning to die
So stranded - effaced & snapping
aimless little astrocytes
wailing for sunrise
or just one...
euthanized night
lucent little snakes
shake
synapses weary of transporting life
aching of staying awake
Flares fire
aggressive & finite
from firefly transmitters
only moaning to die
So stranded - effaced & snapping
aimless little astrocytes
wailing for sunrise
or just one...
euthanized night
Published 26th Nov 2017
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26th Nov 2017 4:17pm
Wow- another gem. I spent 25yrs working in the "mental health" racket, so this piece has a nice ring to it.
26th Nov 2017 7:35pm
27th Nov 2017 10:01pm
Anonymous
26th Nov 2017 9:35pm
AtoMik.. this is truly powerful.. blown away.. stellar write.. belongs in my reading list.. really dig this.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
27th Feb 2018 9:34pm
A fantastic way of describing a dark subject. Wish these were my words.
B
B
27th Feb 2018 9:42pm
Thank you so very much. I appreciate that, but h honestly hope you don't *get* this poem. KWIM?
27th Feb 2018 9:51pm
damn it beautiful Atomik
this is deep
i've been depressed
I feel this at this very moment..
we walk as poets
together yet as one
on our separate journey..
I love reading you..
love Brenda
this is deep
i've been depressed
I feel this at this very moment..
we walk as poets
together yet as one
on our separate journey..
I love reading you..
love Brenda
27th Feb 2018 11:05pm
