unheard

inflated chest
clenched fists
eyes
ready to explode
all
tempered
by a bond
invisible
some day
some spoilsports
will get their due'.....

The moment you're pissed off.
And don't know whether to use your fist or even your teeths...
Because of the rage eating the folk up...

Well,Anger is nothing but destroyer.
He never keep company with humble fellow but love measuring the path of pride.

Nicely written!
With respect,
Lions_den.

welcome
is the peer
and
the review.

appreciate
both
immensely.

rage
is fire
anger
is but reaction, natural

some bonds
are precious enough
to mothball strongest of eruptions.

Funny how just being angry can anger you even more. I could feel yours here cold, I could relate to the history that made the tempering possible. The experience of each one connected to the next with invisible bond that was learned from.

The lesson of control.


As always friend, I enjoy your work. Privileged  to read it.

true.

indeed,  just being angry can anger you even more, like fire feeding off fire.

Couldn't have  said it better my friend- summed it up better than i ever could- the experience, the bond invisible and the lesson in control. Wish  i could add to my reading list  your words here.

Honor, is  all mine
for the peer admired's visit
and the glowing review.

Appreciate both
immensely.

You did say it better my friend, for without your ink I would not have been inspired to read into your words and relate.

Only a Friend
could say and feel as such.

humbled.

again.

Short crisp lines and line breaks ... sweet

welcome
is the peer

and

welcome
is the review.

immensely
appreciated
are both.

Though one is tempted, calm and collected never loses a battle.

Wise is the poet and the words.  

indeed they don't.

am having  severe shortage of words for the review and the reviewer- the only one appropriate would be wise/wisdom.

honored
is the recipient here.