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Broken
Come take a look
At what's deep inside
See the real me
That I try to hide.
Used to so much pain
And anguish too
Feeling worthless
And not knowing what to do.
Standing here feeling invisible
Like I'm not even here
I walk alone so no one
Can see my tears.
On the outside you'll only see
Me laughing and jokin'
But no one will see
That the true me is broken.
At what's deep inside
See the real me
That I try to hide.
Used to so much pain
And anguish too
Feeling worthless
And not knowing what to do.
Standing here feeling invisible
Like I'm not even here
I walk alone so no one
Can see my tears.
On the outside you'll only see
Me laughing and jokin'
But no one will see
That the true me is broken.
Published 19th Sep 2011
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20th Sep 2011 00:01am
I really like this.
Buth there is just a few tiny parts that had a rough flow to it.
But otherwise, amazing job ^-^
Buth there is just a few tiny parts that had a rough flow to it.
But otherwise, amazing job ^-^
21st Sep 2011 7:58am
I really enoyed this, it feels like I can somewhat relate to it n_n
Good job :D
Good job :D
21st Oct 2011 7:31pm
I find this poem to be one of the best i've read so far. It's honest, dark and very heavy. Love it :)
