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The story you tell never ends
The story you impart to old friends
That mask of mental health imparting
A desperate need for all those people departing

A narrative about your state
A narrative confusing to relate
The mask shatters left so exposed
Left deserted while your world corrodes

These fairy tails no one believes
These fairy tails overused and deceives
The mask a shield against apathetic reality
Only fellow readers understand this cruel misery

Syntax prevails its just all fine
Syntax entails another conclusive line
Far too difficult to be honest, concise, matter of facted
When all these emotions and actions-words-edited-redacted

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Written by composedWITHrazors (Blade Artist)
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