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Emotional Cold Front...
Reactions die out like a flame
left alone on a winter night
The colder it gets,
The less oxygen the flames have...
My silence is a sign of the fading oxygen,
My reactions is the fading flame,
My emotions are cold...
You have became my winter night,
you keep getting colder...
I'm experiencing a cold front,
The oxygen is fading away faster
And the flame is dying out rapidly...
A dying flame should never be left alone
on a winter night, It will eventually burn out...
Published 23rd Nov 2017
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15th Apr 2020 4:53pm
Clever analogy with the flame, Aleck...
It's interesting, where you said "you became the winter night"
I liked it a lot.
I have a poem that says something similar where I used a similar analogy...
The very first poem I posted on here actually, if you find time to read:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/273630-a-love-once-lost/
It's interesting, where you said "you became the winter night"
I liked it a lot.
I have a poem that says something similar where I used a similar analogy...
The very first poem I posted on here actually, if you find time to read:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/273630-a-love-once-lost/
15th Apr 2020 5:09pm
@NewBeginnings, I read your poem :-) I commented...
I believe it's amazing that our minds had the same thoughts more or less, It's really amazing.
I believe it's amazing that our minds had the same thoughts more or less, It's really amazing.
15th Apr 2020 5:09pm
Agreed! I thought you might appreciate that! Universal consciousness? :)
15th Apr 2020 5:15pm
