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My Master and I
Our little secret
A kinky place we meet
Down to the basement, I open the door ;
See you waiting with ropes and a smirk
You immediately command:
"strip"
Easily obey, I glide off my dress
revealing the laced lingerie
my perky lil' cleavage
You undress them yourself
revealing me bare;
milky flesh
peeking pink clit
nips n' rounded tits
I shiver in cold, as you start to tie me up;
tightly around my breast, till it turns blue
squeezing me around:
my hips
my legs
my thighs
"I'm your leashed pet,
tell me your command"
You head off to your whip
You grab the cuffs
I simply wait, watching as you arrest me
Then you hang me
My arms above my head
"Does this please you my master?"
You give a nod, a strike to my breasts
Turn me red
Bruise me black n' blue
I know you're pleased
'Tis your approval
You mock me, insult me
Command in domination
I simply abide:
"Yes master please"
I'm your servant, entering in submission
You're my master, dominating all of me...
A kinky place we meet
Down to the basement, I open the door ;
See you waiting with ropes and a smirk
You immediately command:
"strip"
Easily obey, I glide off my dress
revealing the laced lingerie
my perky lil' cleavage
You undress them yourself
revealing me bare;
milky flesh
peeking pink clit
nips n' rounded tits
I shiver in cold, as you start to tie me up;
tightly around my breast, till it turns blue
squeezing me around:
my hips
my legs
my thighs
"I'm your leashed pet,
tell me your command"
You head off to your whip
You grab the cuffs
I simply wait, watching as you arrest me
Then you hang me
My arms above my head
"Does this please you my master?"
You give a nod, a strike to my breasts
Turn me red
Bruise me black n' blue
I know you're pleased
'Tis your approval
You mock me, insult me
Command in domination
I simply abide:
"Yes master please"
I'm your servant, entering in submission
You're my master, dominating all of me...
Written by
SourMelon0313
(H)
Published 23rd Nov 2017
| Edited 24th Nov 2017
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Re. My Master and I
23rd Nov 2017 4:13am
giving thanks to you for this read. you are a woman to treat masterfully!
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Re: Re. My Master and I
23rd Nov 2017 4:18am
Haha, "masterfully" indeed lol
Thank you for reading and you're welcome...
I just wrote this for a kink of mine....
This doesn't hold the best "art"
of words, but I tried to draw a picture..!
as always, appreciate your time and comments,
Love,
-H-
Thank you for reading and you're welcome...
I just wrote this for a kink of mine....
This doesn't hold the best "art"
of words, but I tried to draw a picture..!
as always, appreciate your time and comments,
Love,
-H-
Re. My Master and I
23rd Nov 2017 5:53am
a hardcore cellar of submission sensation...sensationally described by a wide eyed mind...hope the scars were small from the intensely down under...
much apprehension of pain
Jeff
much apprehension of pain
Jeff
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Re: Re. My Master and I
23rd Nov 2017 2:53pm
Yes...Hardcore indeed! lol
The scars are mere prize of her master's "love marks" haha!
I did not experience this myself...but I'm sure it'd hurt..(shivers)
Anyways, Thak you for your comment and read!
Your visits always brings me joy..
Happy Thanksgiving Jeff :)
Love,
-H-
The scars are mere prize of her master's "love marks" haha!
I did not experience this myself...but I'm sure it'd hurt..(shivers)
Anyways, Thak you for your comment and read!
Your visits always brings me joy..
Happy Thanksgiving Jeff :)
Love,
-H-
Re. My Master and I
Anonymous
23rd Nov 2017 6:15am
Your Master must be very pleased with you as his Sub, and vice versa.
Captures part of the Dom, Sub relationship, perfectly.
Captures part of the Dom, Sub relationship, perfectly.
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Re: Re. My Master and I
23rd Nov 2017 2:57pm
Thank you so much!
Your comments & compliments brings great depth of meaning to me...! :)
Yes my master and I would be very happy with eachother once we meet one day....! lol
Appreciate your time, and read dear Arty
Happy Thanksgiving,
Love,
-H-
Your comments & compliments brings great depth of meaning to me...! :)
Yes my master and I would be very happy with eachother once we meet one day....! lol
Appreciate your time, and read dear Arty
Happy Thanksgiving,
Love,
-H-
Re. My Master and I
Anonymous
23rd Nov 2017 3:36pm
Love this Sour, it’s highly erotic and gave me chills.
Very accurate depiction! Much love to you.
Very accurate depiction! Much love to you.
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Re: Re. My Master and I
23rd Nov 2017 5:23pm
Thank you star, I'm glad I was able to paint a picture !
Much appreciated:)
Love,
-H-
Much appreciated:)
Love,
-H-
Re. My Master and I
24th Nov 2017 3:03am
This is very sensual and sexual, and made me speechless. Love the words you used and the picture you painted.....
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. My Master and I
24th Nov 2017 3:10am
Thank you so much RoseJasmine...! :)
I'm glad to have painted a picture and that a sensual vibe came too!
I greatly appreciate your comments, and time in my works!
Love
H
I'm glad to have painted a picture and that a sensual vibe came too!
I greatly appreciate your comments, and time in my works!
Love
H
Re: Re. My Master and I
You're very welcome! I am glad to spend time on your works. Thank you for the follow.....much love!
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Re. My Master and I
Re: Re. My Master and I
24th Nov 2017 9:19am
Re. My Master and I
24th Nov 2017 7:41am
Re: Re. My Master and I
24th Nov 2017 9:22am
Master!
lol
Master thank you for spending your time in my works lol
appreciations n' love,
H
lol
Master thank you for spending your time in my works lol
appreciations n' love,
H
Re. My Master and I
24th Nov 2017 12:23pm
Wow...OMG...wow...U, Lil hot vixen...lol
Amazingly n tantalizingly sexy...
Amazingly n tantalizingly sexy...
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Re: Re. My Master and I
24th Nov 2017 12:37pm
Thank you for your time and read, and continued support, dear Poet. You are a master of the sexy...and am glad to have brought the sensations so...to you :)
greatly appreciated !
Love and respects,
H
greatly appreciated !
Love and respects,
H
Re. My Master and I
24th Nov 2017 6:54pm
Hot submissive write Little One ... I love it. I can visualize the whole playtime. Sensual and erotic and tastefully done. Bravo Lil Sis!
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Re: Re. My Master and I
24th Nov 2017 10:14pm
Thank you Unnie! :)
lol
I never really had a thing much for the garage.. hardcore stuff..But recently I find it quite.. intriguing I shall say haha,
never really tried it, but I have my resources!
Your comments are greatly appreciated,
Love
Your lil' one
lol
I never really had a thing much for the garage.. hardcore stuff..But recently I find it quite.. intriguing I shall say haha,
never really tried it, but I have my resources!
Your comments are greatly appreciated,
Love
Your lil' one
Re. My Master and I
25th Nov 2017 7:47pm
I don't get the whole submissive thing but here you have written about it beautifully :-)))
Big Like :-))))))
Big Like :-))))))
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Re: Re. My Master and I
Oh dear David, haha,
thank you for reading my works and your time on it kind sir
I am yet to grasp the true beauty of writing, but here I lay a work of one of my secrets...
Thank you :)
Love
H
thank you for reading my works and your time on it kind sir
I am yet to grasp the true beauty of writing, but here I lay a work of one of my secrets...
Thank you :)
Love
H
Re. My Master and I
3rd Dec 2017 3:22am
There is a playfulness in your submission here which makes it all the more erotic. Your sub poem arouses me into heated attention. You write the game with originality and a flair for great writing.
John
John
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Re: Re. My Master and I
3rd Dec 2017 4:42am
Oh My..!
Thank you so much :)
I am so grateful that you see such great things in my write...I am honored..!
I appreciate your time and visit in my works
Love
H
Thank you so much :)
I am so grateful that you see such great things in my write...I am honored..!
I appreciate your time and visit in my works
Love
H