Don't Toy With Me

Oh Little One ... this is exquisite ... the tone is so defiant, confrontational ... the metaphors are fresh and contemporary ... one of your best yet! Just tell me who this person is ... and your Big Sis will take care of them

Thank you Unnie! :)
Your words brought such comfort to my heart...
Let's both fight through this heart struggles as us girlies,
and soon, we'll find real love!

I greatly dear your visits, words and comment, again,
Thank you!

Love,
-H-

That's telling him, Sour!... Loved the measured indignation along the strong conviction!

Thank you so much Takis, for your words has comforted me so...

I always appreciate your visits, your time in reading my works dear sir.. :)

Love,
-H-

So relatable. Almost painfully so.

Thank you for your read and comment fellow poet....

-H-

Anytime, friend :)

Hmmmmm.... Soul...

When the one you love takes your sermon as optical illusions.

He sets you as a dice and toss your emotions either he likes...

This is a point when being in hell seem acceptable than being in love.

Lot of incoveniences are ushered in:
Such folk less rever you even though you cherish him as gold,even as an egg that shouldn't slip from the hand...

I think it's helpful making him know your standard and that you're aware of his game:

Players are always teasers...

Heads up poet...
With respect,
Lions_den.

Thank you dear poet,
for your kind words and comment..
it had soothed me so....

One day, hopefully,
a real love who cherish and love me will come and find me...

With great appreciation, respect and love,
-H-

Surely,you just wait with the right heart.

I hope he's not a poet here on DUP, giving those of us with good hearts a bad name. And so callous a man to treat a delicate heart so carelessly deserves a dark dirty dungeon floor with swill served to him in a dirty bowl on Thanksgiving day!
I feel your pain H!
JJ

Thank you so much dear JJ..!
You are so kind, for your comforting words,
and heart....

I greatly appreciate your reads, and comment,
Happy Thanksgiving!
-H-

fantastic kick in the head poem -  no one should ever totally surrender self to somebody else - a good fight back hymn :-)))

Excellent Ink :-)))

Thank you so much dear David :)
Yes, for others shall show respect, and appreciate the fragile heart!

Greatly appreciate your comment and reads sir.

Love,
-H-

"Using your skills-
to  fit the sentence
tweak it just right
honing the words of your evils... "
I love those lines SourMelon, they are strongly hitting my heart. I know you are holding your pain back inside yourself.....oh, I just don't know what to say....hope you are well....
Love, RoseJasmine

Thank you so much RoseJasmine...! :)
Your comment, and your comforting words has touched me..

I greatly appreciate your time , in reading and hearing my heart..

Love,
-H-

was I just a "kid's meal surprise"
to your kid (your mind)

Explains it all perfectly. Don’t let anyone break you. 🙂

You are so kind dear Arty!
Thank you so much ....:)

Yes I shall harden my shell not to be broken and treated as a toy...
As always,appreciate your time in my works,
Love,
-H-

beautiful poetess powerful write
standing up for yourself..

"You, a master of words
making me your puppet
with strings as my emotions... "

this is a painful place to be
I love that you stand up for yourself
in the end..

love Crim

Thank you crim

Your visit and comfort brings warmth to me
Yes, I shall stand up for myself, and not be tweaked and messed with...!



Much appreciation,
Love
H

Intense, and powerful. Take no crap, you go girl...lol

Nope! Not being toyed here!
lol I'm a gal with REAL feelings ...not some dollar store Barbie-doll
Thank you SIN, for your time in my works :)
Love
H

who's ass do I need to go kick!?....

this is a wonderful poem of intent and flow...you pull references in at ease...so glad we get read your fierceness in rhyme..

love Jeff

Thank you so much dear Jeff... :)
for your wonderful comment leaves me comforted and flattered ...
I'm glad you read my works as well

Love
H

I'm not your toy...  (well said)

:)

excellent piece

Thank you very much dear jane.. :)

I greatly appreciate your time..
<3
H