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The Little Shy Rose Bud
I steer my dream boat
rowing downstream
to find Tao Yuanming’s
Peach Blossom Spring
in the secluded Pacific ring
where people live on the earth edge
unware of the outside world for ages
Where I have witnessed
the little shy rose bud
hides her heart in the pistil
forgot the season calling
missed the best time blooming
even never let others relate to her thinking
Ah, my little shy rose bud
why don’t you probe out to see
what’s the world going to be
let’s sit side by side
listen to the song
sung by the moon and sun
Night comes after day
flows come before ebbs
this life won’t ever long stay
and we won’t own each other
for another ten decades
Spring goes and comes
flowers fade and bloom
nothing but love will last
as long as you would love to
I will sail my dream boat to you
I happened to see
your showering petal tears
as bright as sunbeams
prove that your heart still has dreams
why not let your crystal clear tears
falls into my non-alcohol beer
then we sail our dream boat
to where the sky meets the sea
watch the horizon in one hue with glee
Get on board
my little shy rose bud
let’s set sail beyond the border
where decorated with diamond dew
the glistening heady brew
color the sky and sea in blue
and I am, I am your crew
rowing downstream
to find Tao Yuanming’s
Peach Blossom Spring
in the secluded Pacific ring
where people live on the earth edge
unware of the outside world for ages
Where I have witnessed
the little shy rose bud
hides her heart in the pistil
forgot the season calling
missed the best time blooming
even never let others relate to her thinking
Ah, my little shy rose bud
why don’t you probe out to see
what’s the world going to be
let’s sit side by side
listen to the song
sung by the moon and sun
Night comes after day
flows come before ebbs
this life won’t ever long stay
and we won’t own each other
for another ten decades
Spring goes and comes
flowers fade and bloom
nothing but love will last
as long as you would love to
I will sail my dream boat to you
I happened to see
your showering petal tears
as bright as sunbeams
prove that your heart still has dreams
why not let your crystal clear tears
falls into my non-alcohol beer
then we sail our dream boat
to where the sky meets the sea
watch the horizon in one hue with glee
Get on board
my little shy rose bud
let’s set sail beyond the border
where decorated with diamond dew
the glistening heady brew
color the sky and sea in blue
and I am, I am your crew
Written by
RoseJasmine
Published 22nd Nov 2017
| Edited 27th Jan 2018
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Re. The Little Shy Rose Bud
22nd Nov 2017 3:53am
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22nd Nov 2017 4:20am
Thank you Lawrence, your reading means a lot to me. Glad you liked it. Appreciate your support.
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
Re. The Little Shy Rose Bud
22nd Nov 2017 4:35am
"Where I have witnessed
the little shy rose bud
hides her heart in the pistil
forgot the season calling
missed the best time blooming
even never let others relate to her thinking"
this one is now a favorite of mine....I love the way you paint your pictures...it comes into view in a special way...a Jasmine way....
love -Jeff
the little shy rose bud
hides her heart in the pistil
forgot the season calling
missed the best time blooming
even never let others relate to her thinking"
this one is now a favorite of mine....I love the way you paint your pictures...it comes into view in a special way...a Jasmine way....
love -Jeff
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Re: Re. The Little Shy Rose Bud
Thank you for the nice comment. I am excited that you loved the lines and the way I paint the picture....Enjoy your visit and comment very much.
Love Love, RoseJasmine
Love Love, RoseJasmine
Re. The Little Shy Rose Bud
Anonymous
22nd Nov 2017 8:19am
“ I happened to see
your showering petal tears
as bright as sunbeams
prove that your heart still has dreams “
Beautiful !!!!!
your showering petal tears
as bright as sunbeams
prove that your heart still has dreams “
Beautiful !!!!!
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Re: Re. The Little Shy Rose Bud
22nd Nov 2017 8:44am
Thank you Rags, Glad to see what your comment is, and I am excited that you thought the lines are beautiful. Appreciate your always support.
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
Re. The Little Shy Rose Bud
22nd Nov 2017 12:27pm
Re: Re. The Little Shy Rose Bud
22nd Nov 2017 1:54pm
Glad it helped, and it's what I want this work to be my dear. Love your comment so much since your ease and peace are contagious.....now I feel them too.....
Much love, RoseJasmine
Much love, RoseJasmine
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22nd Nov 2017 3:08pm
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Re: Re. The Little Shy Rose Bud
22nd Nov 2017 3:16pm
Ah Dani, so glad to have your visit and the RL add. Your comment is so touching to my sensitive heart. Thank you so much for the heartwarming support.
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
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23rd Nov 2017 2:18am
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23rd Nov 2017 2:26am
Re. The Little Shy Rose Bud
22nd Nov 2017 5:07pm
Yes, this piece has left me to imagine, a boat sailing through peace...
Nice and left me a vision of sweet travel,
no fear of waves crashing
only a calm sea...
Love,
-H-
Nice and left me a vision of sweet travel,
no fear of waves crashing
only a calm sea...
Love,
-H-
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Re: Re. The Little Shy Rose Bud
22nd Nov 2017 5:31pm
Thank you SourMelon for the nice comment. I love your imagination. Right, the sea this time is calm and peaceful for me.....so glad to have your visit, I feel the warmth through your words.
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
Anonymous
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22nd Nov 2017 6:01pm
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Re: Re. The Little Shy Rose Bud
22nd Nov 2017 6:14pm
Oh wow! Dearest Silence, your comment made me jump up and shout. Where does your sensitivity come from to have such a comment? You always give me surprises.....thank you so much for the solid support!
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
Re. The Little Shy Rose Bud
23rd Nov 2017 00:36am
what a beautiful journey :-) lovely descriptions - I was there :-)
Huge LIKE! :-)
Huge LIKE! :-)
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Re: Re. The Little Shy Rose Bud
23rd Nov 2017 1:26am
Yeah, I saw you rowing another boat and we said hi there :-) Glad to read your comment :-) Thank you so much for the support!
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
Re. The Little Shy Rose Bud
23rd Nov 2017 4:32am
waw!! I am awestruck by your concept and imagination.
"The little shy
rose bud hides
her heart in the
pistil"
"As long as you will love to
I will sail my dream boat
to your heart"
Rose Jasmine..I will love to please sail...( winks)
bravo!!! once more
"The little shy
rose bud hides
her heart in the
pistil"
"As long as you will love to
I will sail my dream boat
to your heart"
Rose Jasmine..I will love to please sail...( winks)
bravo!!! once more
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Re: Re. The Little Shy Rose Bud
23rd Nov 2017 4:43am
Thank you Lucius for commenting. Love to read your comment very much. Yes, please get on board with me. Let's sail.....It would be fun to sail with you.....
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
Re. The Little Shy Rose Bud
24th Nov 2017 4:03am
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24th Nov 2017 5:36am
Thank you so much for the nice comment Silent_One. Appreciate you spend time reading and supporting.
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
Re. The Little Shy Rose Bud
Anonymous
25th Nov 2017 6:43pm
So beautifully painted. Left me feeling very serene and with a smile :)
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Re: Re. The Little Shy Rose Bud
25th Nov 2017 6:49pm
So glad it made you smile. I feel so happy you liked it. Thank you for the nice comment and the warm support.
Much love, RoseJasmine
Much love, RoseJasmine
Re. The Little Shy Rose Bud
26th Nov 2017 2:06am
''little''
shy rose bud
the ''small'' red blushing rose
has become so biggggg!!!!!!!
so many love it
24/2 =12 comments
on one poem
I have yet to get in all my poetry
again's misery rosy poetry
shy rose bud
the ''small'' red blushing rose
has become so biggggg!!!!!!!
so many love it
24/2 =12 comments
on one poem
I have yet to get in all my poetry
again's misery rosy poetry
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Re: Re. The Little Shy Rose Bud
26th Nov 2017 2:14am
Hi I see you there. Thank you for the nice comment. It made me smile.
Well, I don't get this kind of honor all the time. Thank you Again for the warm support.
Much love, RoseJasmine
Well, I don't get this kind of honor all the time. Thank you Again for the warm support.
Much love, RoseJasmine
Re: Re. The Little Shy Rose Bud
26th Nov 2017 2:21am
I feel so happy to see my poets engorging
the open wide sea of composing lovely poetry
be at it Rosy
one day yo will say
again lead you to fame
may be I will not be
but my good wishes will remain
till lasts poetic domain
all the best rosy
hope you will compose
exotic poetry
the open wide sea of composing lovely poetry
be at it Rosy
one day yo will say
again lead you to fame
may be I will not be
but my good wishes will remain
till lasts poetic domain
all the best rosy
hope you will compose
exotic poetry
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Re: Re. The Little Shy Rose Bud
26th Nov 2017 2:50am
Ah, erotic poetry? I will think about it. It comes only with right feelings....not all the time.....
Re. The Little Shy Rose Bud
26th Nov 2017 1:55pm
u r abs right guys hold it oftenly its always standing mostly but gals traverse the valley slowly stealthily guys have nothing to lose they let their seeds loose only gals have to take care ere they get tied to a noose you are right rosinessly take your time fairly ere you commit to ones squarely all guys keep an eye for an opportunity a guy told me today he lays one daily---- must be a maniac really erotica is lively
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2nd Dec 2017 2:14am
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2nd Dec 2017 2:27am