Oh Ocean

Don’t ever apologize for how you feel.
As beautiful as it is, the ocean can be a most dangerous place.
Well written

Ah, glad you think that way as me. Love your comment dear Rags. Thanks for your support!
Love, RoseJasmine

Love the turn in this one ... it is so easy to forget the mercilessly of the sea.

So glad you loved the turn Soledad. Right, so easy to be tricked by its seeming mercy. Thanks for your support!
Love, RoseJasmine

Dear Stillborn, your comment can be another short piece of the ocean.....
Love the aspect of what you view things. Thank you for the always support!
Love, RoseJasmine

This piece is deep like the ocean
great write!

Hey Lucius, glad to read your comment. It made me excited since you thought it is as deep as the ocean. A wonderful comment! Thank you!
Love, RoseJasmine

Pretty vision and rhyme...made me smile

I love to see you smile Jeff. It's my honor to get your support. Much much appreciated!
Love, RoseJasmine

this was a real beautiful write - it made me think of a country native talking to a christian missionary :-))
that's just the way mind was working today :-)

Really enjoyed it thanks for sharing :-)))))))

Since The Bleak Pacific didn't completely convey my thoughts, so I added this piece to conclude what I have in mind. I love ocean, but often are terrified of its immense power of devastration.....thanks for your suport David! I am honored.......
Love, RoseJasmine

Love the ocean, but as pretty as it is appears on the surface I refrain from diving into it's depths...
Beautiful write.

Glad to have your visit Sophie. Thanks for the great comment. I consider "Beautiful write" as a big compliment. I often read yours but feel shy to comment.....Much appreciate your encouragement.
Love, RoseJasmine

Exactly as meant – really enjoyed this piece.

Flattered to hear of your visits to the pieces of my soul that I spill through my fingertips.
I like to think I’m pretty friendly – no need to be shy ;)

Dear Sophie, thank you for the re-reply and the kindness. I will leave my comment when I read your poems. Really appreciated!

That is so true! Happy to read you again! Amazing, my dear

Lana, do you know how happy I see you again after a long while. Thank you for still reading my poems. Much appreciate your support!
Love, RoseJasmine

u hv cum a long way swimming on the ocean surfs as I drown myself in anonymity  bound from no where to no where  my woods have now b cum abstract all have by now had my extract now i ooze but restlessly o poet lady u be

Dear Again, glad to read your comment. This has been a long time since we met last time here. Yeah, I have been swimming in the ocean and sharpened my swimmimg skills a bit. Enjoy your visit and appreciate your support.
Love, RoseJasmine

thank u girl ...I have been very busy
do read my exotica version
of this  miss

Sure, I will. Actually I have already read.

Then why not comment

Oceans are like majestic mountains
with snowcaps on top
and bubbling hot lava beneath.
You can ski down the mountain
or surf on the waves,
but what lies beneath is a monster
waiting to swallow you whole...  
not so unlike the lovely flower
that is your namesake,
pretty and sweetly scented
while concealing sharks teeth
beneath it's leaves...

Beautifully written Rose!!!
JJ

Glad to have your visit. I feel the same way as you, but you pointed out the essence of the huge monster much better. Really enjoy reading your comment and appreciate your lovely words.
Love, RoseJasmine

I liked this, what is beauty is not always, and what is ugly is sometimes beauty.

So glad you liked it Silent_one. Your comment is beautiful. I love it. Thank you so much for the support.

Love, RoseJasmine